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Damocles23


I write what makes me happy. Hope it makes you happy as well!

Comments ( 22 )

:trollestia:Hmm... seems like an interesting concept. Adding to read later list. Oh and FIRST!

Edit: Okay, finished reading. This is overall a very decent clopfic. I don't normally clop to genderswaps, buuuuut it all worked out nicely. I see few grammatical errors, mostly the uncapitalized i. Regardless, it is well written. Fav'd, liked and watched. Keep up the good work.

:rainbowwild::heart::pinkiehappy: with a twist. Cool!

Finally! som more good clop featuring our beloved Rainbow Blitz :rainbowwild:
Kudos to you :rainbowkiss:

I made it about a third in, and had to pause to up-vote: "THE TITLE. THE TITLE!" I just lost it.

:| Pinkie. You. *motions at the title* *motions at "THE TITLE. THE TITLE!"* .... *motions back at story's title* .... I give up. Do what you're gonna do, Pinkie, I don't have NEARLY enough 4th wall spackle to patch those cracks. :| :facehoof:

The idea is nice, the little character building you had was decent, but the storyline was mediocre, the clop was second-rate, the characters seemed a little OOC and unnecessary Cherilee is unnecessary. Could be better.

1091519 Well, you seemed to beat me to the punch. I second this.

ā€œDASHIEEEEEEUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUAAAAARGHHHH!ā€

1091415
That lousy fourth wall will soon crumble! Muahahahahahahahaha!
1091607
Ah, yes! Truly the product of an almost Shakespearean flash of genius :rainbowlaugh:

Have you ever seen any stallions go out with their cocks whipped out like that?

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Had to facepalm at some of the OOC-ness, but perhaps that's to be expected with clop!
Overall though, not bad! :twilightsheepish:

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Oh, Celestia. I can't believe I wasn't drunk when I wrote that :rainbowlaugh:

Yeah!! Finnaly more rainbow blitz!!! Rainbow Blitz best r63 pony!!!:rainbowwild::rainbowlaugh::rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild:

the end made me laugh

Your the first fic I've read that hit applejacks accent spot on, impressive job god sir :moustache::moustache::moustache:

1115291

Thank you. This gives me the will to write a fic with her as the main character. :ajsmug:

1115357 I have been writing one but I've been really busy, as of late, and it's just on paper right now. It would be my first fic. How hard is it to post a story on here? And my good sir I would definitely read it if you did write one. :)

1091982 Pinkie, stop breaking the fourth wall. :ajbemused:

The title. Mmmmyes, that was a wuuunderfugh gag, nrg mmyes.

YOU!!!:flutterrage: sir did a very good job there, :moustache: I am impressed :rainbowderp:, astounded :trollestia:, satisfied:twilightblush: and truly happy for what I just read :pinkiehappy:

you earned yourself 6 of 6 mustaches :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

also a fave an a thumb up, keep it up:twilightsmile:

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:/6. I am very satisfied, but this has some pretty big issues. You have grammatical hiccups here and there, as well as weird or redundant phrasing that breaks the immersion at places. Also, the final clop section with the anal was a bit late in the game...:trollestia:

"THE TITLE!! THE TITLE!!!" LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL:rainbowlaugh: this story gets a like Just for that!!:pinkiehappy: also :rainbowkiss::heart::pinkiesmile: is an OTP of mine

So fucking hot it was cloptastic! :pinkiehappy::heart:

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