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Silly, but enjoyable. Have an upvote.
Hey you still live, neet
I really like it!
Awesome work, cally! I wish I could write like this... though, writing is no fun when you already know what's going to happen, lol.
6185973 what he said
Goddamn cally. You sure do know how to write porn. Also everything about this story is my fetish.
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you can totally write like this. I enjoyed appleblimp quite a bit. I only wish you'd spent more time describing how big she was, how big she was getting, how it was making her feel, etc.
Please keep writing because you're pretty damn good and you seem to like making ponies BIG... and there just isn't enough of that on this site.
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Thanks! I have more ideas coming, i just seem to be convinced my writing is crap. I'll soldier on though since you all seem to enjoy it so much.
6191411 Thanks for the tips. I'll see what I can do. I'll try it again, just hope I got the juices I have to make it work.
Being reader is so much more fun than writing... but when you're not the only one who wants to see more of the same thing cause a lot of piggys can't take a crack at huge growth stories, guess you gotta sacrifice your own fun in order to fulfill that.
Seriously, who needs realism in a growth story? This is fiction, damn it! Go crazy!!!
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okay... I have to say something. I went back and read Appleblimp last night and holy crap... you're already way better than me. You describe WAY more than me.
I'm dead serious. In this story, do you know where it takes place? In the crystal caves beneath Canterlot.
How do you know this?
Because I just straight up tell you that. Oh, and at the very end I mention that Cadance's hooves clink against the crystalline floor.
Nothing else.
You talk about the insides of the apple family house, talk about AJ's thought's, her suspicions, etc.
It's night and fricken day, you and I. So why in the hell did I say you fell short? It was right at the very end. Describing giant ponies blowing up out of control is very difficult, and that's the ONLY place you fell short.
I have a few tips and a proposition if you'd like.
1st. Take your time when it comes to describing the really big growth. You'll probably need to hit it multiple times.
2nd. Consider adding another pony, maybe tell the story from their view. Heck, just make it erotic if you need to. Talk about them touching the ballooning pony, how their hooves sink into their body, etc.
3rd. If you like, we could do some story swapping/prereading/editing. Keep in mind, my clop account isn't my primary, so it may take a day or two to get back to you, but man, I know we could both benefit from each other's skill.
finally, even if you don't end up writing clop, you have real freaking talent when it comes to writing. Don't throw that away.
6192560 Wow... thanks. Though, I'm unsure of your proposition. I mostly do video games, and I was wanting to try my hands at clop writting, just to get a feel for it. I got stressed out... but the positive feedback really gave me a small bit of encouragement to try again... Though, I guess I could take up on your offer. And thanks for the tips.
I'll consider it. When I release my next story, I'll think about the proposition.
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Well, there's no pressure or anything.
Just do what you like. If you don't like writing, don't do it... but I'm willing to bet you rather enjoyed writing that story. Just by reading, it felt like you enjoyed it given the time you spent on details.
Oh and don't get stressed out over this. It's not worth that. Have fun first and foremost and write when it suits you.
6193127 Lol, I just don't know which one I "love" more. "Working" or "reading".
Nipple penetration? Why would yo- Just kidding! I fucking LOVE IT! D:<
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There needs to be more nipple penetration on this site. Especially if it ends in a monster creaming.
Nipple penetration. Part of me feels like that's a sin and I need to flame you for it. Another part of me acknowledges that I'd have to discuss which form of nipple penetration and that's enough to prevent me from ever wanting to not up vote this story.
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Trust me, I'm well versed in how nipples work and that they certainly don't work as they do in this story.
But hey, while we're filling ponies up with hundreds of gallons of bodily fluids, why put limits on ourselves? We'd also have to broach the subject that the testicles don't produce semen, yet in this story I take the liberty to add that half-truth in as well.
Why? Because as Tarantino said, "BECAUSE IT'S FUN!"
I think this should have a 'Dark' tag because it's kinda rape-ey...
Makes my boner sad. D':
Ah! Exactly what I hoped for when I clicked. Thanks!
im sorry, all i read was " Trolling comments"
