MIXED FEELINGS....
ok with it?
annoyed? (Scootaloo's crazy speaking)
grossed-out?
WTF?

I dunno how the story's gonna end up...WE'LL JUST HAVE TO SEE!

Flutterscoot?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

I dunno. But then I scrolled down and looked at the last sentence of the first chapter.

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I think I'll give it a go.

Oh lord. I'll give it to you, the first chapter is fairly well written, made me laugh ... hope you don't mind if I don't read any more...

I dunno' why, but this has greatly intrigued me...

Tracking...

Great writing! Can't wait to see what you do with it.

Interesting...
But a little random...

Oh lol, I can tell that this is going to be interesting

I'm strangely intrigued. Hurry up with moar!

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It's me.
...I'm back.
This is really well written, and it's been niggling at me. So despite my previous comments I will track and come back and see how this progresses ... I have a nasty feeling that I'm going to enjoy it, and feel like a very bad pony, but nonetheless, I watch with interest.
Now hurry up and post more, dammit!

Great start, added to my reading list.

BTW, little typo? "the water coming from her noise" Should that be nose?

Well I think they learned rule no. 1 when it comes to curing hic-ups: NO MAGIC POTIONS!!!!!

649453 Don't mind at all, I know the direction I'm going won't be to everyone's taste, but what the heck. I'm glad you enjoyed, if only for the first chapter

It started off really great, but after i finished the first chapter i just can't keep reading this.
Sorry but this ain't my cup of tea. Good luck!

What's with all the Fluttervestite fics lately?

...Huh, Futaloo - that's new!

Just curious about the status of a second chapter?

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In the works; mostly waiting on my ability to sit down and finish writing it.

Looks to be pretty interesting. Gonna have to check out the next chapter.

I really liked the Calvin and Hobbes reference too.

do you still plan on finishing this?

Your lack of morality pleases me...
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Yep! Just been... a lot of stuff in the way. And, you know. Pandaren.

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My lack of what now?

>Hiccups
>CMC attempt cure
>Results in Scootaloo growing a penis

Yeah, this is like something I'd write.

But seriously, you captured the CMC's characters pretty well. There are a few little technical quibbles (a few missed commas, and some of the dialogue spacing is weird), but for the most part this way quite entertaining.

Project dead?

fic is so ded

y u died ;_"

lol it takes balls to get over the hiccups lol. wonderful first chapter I was laughing so many times at there antics (tis why I love the CMC) you really did well in portraying there characters in this. kinda wondering what scoots is gonna do now that she's joined the 'ball'ers side hehehe

“Your butt’s going to get big,” warned Scootaloo, reaching for one of the treats herself.
“Maybe I’d rather have a big butt, than a skinny little butt like yours!” snapped Sweetie Belle playfully, sticking out her crumb-covered tongue.

I rather like thr idea of Sweetie Belle being fattened up and getting a big butt as a result.

“Duh. Winning!” mumbled Scootaloo around her overstuffed mouth.