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I apologize in advance for any grammar or spelling errors. I am very tired but I wanted to crank this one out. I also apologize for the sex scene. I'm not one for clop but it was important I put it in there but apologies to anyone who was offended or whatever. I'm going to bed. Cheers.
i am intrigued even if the sex scene was present its a good story i hope you add more
Great addition, little short, but great.
Oh shit Twilight's goin' Super Saiyan on us!
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I apologize for the shortness. I try my best to give a good decent read per chapter, but happy your enjoying it thus far.
Cheers.
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u know if we had a hot blooded pinkie pie on deck go super sayian she's basically surprise surprise...........id love to see a fic with that thrown in......
Still liking the story, and I hope whatever your personal issues were, are resolved.
Loving it.
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Glad your enjoying it.
To anyone following this story, Part 7 is in the works, but it probably won't be up till sometime this weekend. Have some issues that must be dealt with urgently. I apologize for the wait, just bear with me.
I can't help but feel this chapter is much shorter than normal. Also, unless I'm missing something, or it will be explained later, I don't quite see where this ties in with the rest of the fic. Thanks for your time, and keep it up.
Edit- Thanks for updating, this makes much more sense now. Can't wait until the next chapter!
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The chapter has now been re-edited, hopefully to clear up the confusion. Probably shouldn't be writing 3 in the morning. It's cliche but I see what you meant. I was going to save it for the next part, but I can see where readers can get a bit lost. So, I thank you for making it known. Also, I agree that when I wrote this it felt a bit shorter than what I normally do. I didn't want to focus too much on Malum...at least not yet.
So again, thank you for your feedback. I appreciate it.
Cheers.
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Part 7 has been re-edited to clear up confusion. Hope this helps.
ok i kinda figured it was a dream in the first place
nice chapter...didnt see that end coming lol
I really want to read that letter. I also wonder if Celestia is still allright or if Luna did something to her considering Twilight hasn't seen her in years. Hope the next one comes soon but take the time you need, wouldn't want to rush a great story like this one. =)
Shits gon get REAL!
Works fine for me, you might have been able to extend their meet-up a bit more but you didn't do a bad job of it at all, the only part that felt rushed was when they went to the tree-house and just grabbed Pinkie and said 'Let's go!' But It makes sense that they would be kinda rushed in those circumstances. Kinda sad they just stood there and watched Luna rip that unicorn in half, but I guess they were just too shocked a the sight to think of helping him.
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Lol, about the unicorn. Originally I was just going to have them come in and there Luna was standing, waiting for them, but I figured, well why would she be just standing there? So, lo and behold, tortured unicorn. Should they have helped, yea probably, but you basically hit it on the nail. Pinkie scared, Twilight having more fuel for her rage, and Celestia now realizing how cruel her sister is. Oh and shock. Plenty of shock. Thanks for your feedback, simply love it
Cheers.
It was good, but I think your feelings of the reconciliation are true. It was a bit rushed, but not to the point of ruining the chapter.
OH SHIT!!!!!
Wonderful to see Pinkamena come out. Any other non-unicorn I would expect Luna to be able to break with little effort, but I feel she is going to be in alot of trouble trying to deal with Pinkamena. Enjoy your triip! :)
Hell's yeah! Pinkameana for the win!
Luna watched as the pink pony started laughing like a maniac.
"What are you laughing about welp?" Luna demanded. She was completely at a lost for what was happening.
Pinkie turned to Luna staring into her eyes laughing. Then Luna noticed. Pinkie's pupils had become small and red. Her bouncy mane went flat along with her tail. Pinkie stood up on her hind legs, continually laughing. Her pink bright coat turned into a darker shade of itself, and a blood red aura radiated from her body.
all i can say is this...luna...you are the most royally bucked pony i know of right now...
great chapter keep up the work
"let’s put a smile on that face!"
“Even gods can bleed!”
Gawd, these References. Very good chapter, very creepy Pinkie. Keep up the good work!
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Yes the references lol. I don't know if that's a good or bad thing but glad your enjoying it.
I enjoy this way to much!
I knew the element of slaughter....err...laughter wouldn't let me down. :) Great chapter.
cant wait fore the next chapter to be up
YAY!
great chapter
but what happend with pinkimena and luna?
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There are going to be events taking place while Pinkamena and Luna fight. Part 14 takes place while Part 15 and 16 are taking place all at the same time. I am simply telling what is happening but we will come back to them right where we left off, don't you worry
yay
726057 you know what they say you cant spell slaughter without laughter
Interesting... Still can't wait to see what happens to Twi after what Celestia said in the last chapter.
Yeah...Luna reaallly should have looked into Pinkie a bit more before the whole 'take over the world by killing all your friends' thing. I kind of wonder if something took hold of Luna's mind like nightmare moon did and turned her this way, or if this is really her own delusions of grandeur that turned her to this. As always a good story, and loving the portrayal of pinkie.
O.O this is epic and so much awsomeness in it along with the insanity of pinkimena
this is awsome 
ah so i see nightmare moon did take luna over.
i love dis fic
Getting credited feels so good inside.
I really thought Luna was going be raped by nightmare moon.
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LOL. Sir, you have made my day with that comment. You have earned a Pinkie.
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Please don't make fun of rape.
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I don't condone rape. Just the fact that someone was thinking that kinda threw me for a loop. Didn't mean to offend.
duh
how can you ask such a question
i am still thouroughly enjoying this story
, anyway i doubt celly will win against nmm.
good job so far i am enjoying the story so far
Now that more of what was up with Luna has been explained I can get into it more. I have to say that I'm really interested in what they can to to revive their friends. Also more explanation on the power that they seem to have. Unless of course I missed something.
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alright, well concerning Twilight's power, it it based off her emotions. When she has intense feelings such as rage and hate, her element is amplified to a devastating effect. This is somewhat explained in Part 4. Now I'm sure, among others, wonder about Pinkie and Pinkamena. There is an explanation for that, but I won't be delving into that within this story, but learning how she can become Pinkamena with her abilities will be explained a lot in the future. You can count on that.