• Member Since 6th Oct, 2012
  • offline last seen Jun 23rd, 2019

Jerxmy


Ehhh.......uurhmm.....

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Princess Celestia and Twilight Sparkle have known each other since the beginning. Celestia has been there for Twilight for her whole life, will she be there after this?

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Comments ( 6 )

It was a good premise but feels like you didn't want to write this, it's rushed and very lacking in detail. You barely touch on the emotional aspect of it, other than in passing, overall it felt like it was something you had to do, but didn't want to.

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Thanks for the feedback! This is actually my first fanfiction, and it was actually just a small collaboration with a friend. But I'll practice my writing and try again soon! :pinkiehappy:

What others said, but I have a soft spot for Twilestia.

Sooo...

Upvote!

Enjoy!

I have royal duties to attend too

"attend to".

preemptively prevented

*khem* preempted

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