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I can't help but feel this chapter is much shorter than normal. Also, unless I'm missing something, or it will be explained later, I don't quite see where this ties in with the rest of the fic. Thanks for your time, and keep it up.
Edit- Thanks for updating, this makes much more sense now. Can't wait until the next chapter!
im confused
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The chapter has now been re-edited, hopefully to clear up the confusion. Probably shouldn't be writing 3 in the morning. It's cliche but I see what you meant. I was going to save it for the next part, but I can see where readers can get a bit lost. So, I thank you for making it known. Also, I agree that when I wrote this it felt a bit shorter than what I normally do. I didn't want to focus too much on Malum...at least not yet.
So again, thank you for your feedback. I appreciate it.
Cheers.
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Part 7 has been re-edited to clear up confusion. Hope this helps.
ok i kinda figured it was a dream in the first place