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Works fine for me, you might have been able to extend their meet-up a bit more but you didn't do a bad job of it at all, the only part that felt rushed was when they went to the tree-house and just grabbed Pinkie and said 'Let's go!' But It makes sense that they would be kinda rushed in those circumstances. Kinda sad they just stood there and watched Luna rip that unicorn in half, but I guess they were just too shocked a the sight to think of helping him.
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Lol, about the unicorn. Originally I was just going to have them come in and there Luna was standing, waiting for them, but I figured, well why would she be just standing there? So, lo and behold, tortured unicorn. Should they have helped, yea probably, but you basically hit it on the nail. Pinkie scared, Twilight having more fuel for her rage, and Celestia now realizing how cruel her sister is. Oh and shock. Plenty of shock. Thanks for your feedback, simply love it
Cheers.
It was good, but I think your feelings of the reconciliation are true. It was a bit rushed, but not to the point of ruining the chapter.
You know... I saw all this coming when Luna first started gaming...
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HEY LUNA i hope you enjoy the long vacation there going to send you on now.............. TO THE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON