They say that only the foolish, the brave, and the desperate choose to enter the Everfree Forest, and they aren't wrong. Be it bloodthirsty beasts waiting for their next meal to walk by or gaping ravines shrouded by the total darkness, there is no shortage of reasons to stay out. However, as a lone filly will soon learn, the forest itself pulses with a life all its own, one that few know of and fewer still have ever witnessed.
They say that only the foolish, the brave, and the desperate choose to enter the Everfree Forest, but only the lucky are permitted to leave.
Thanks to Majin Syeekoh, TGM, and Kamikakushi for pre-reading.
Oh my! That was a lovely read. Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you for saying so; I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Replace Everfree Forest with Gas-Station Bathroom and it still makes sense.
Wow.
I have few words.
And here they are...
WHAT A TWIST!
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It was a snap to write.
Well that took a dark turn. I like it.
On a side note, do you plan to write any more stories featuring this little filly? She seems like an interesting character, albeit one with a less than ideal homelife.
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Well that was a bit darker than anticipated. Good one though.
Pegamoose, come back to us~
I was tricked! I thought she was going to die before I started reading and then she was going to make it and then she died in the end!
Very well done, author. I tip my hat to you.
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Yeah, take that, reader expectations! Kapow!
6279510 spoilers dude.
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Then don't read the comments. Sounds like not my problem.
That's all I can say.
I admit, that bookshelf add was the result of a misclick. Still, I didn't want to fake you out, so I decided to give this a look. I'm very glad that I did so. This was a wonderfully evocative tale of suspense and terror. Thank you for it.
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So what you're saying is I should rename all my stories "Sharktavia" and you'll accidentally read them.
I can get behind this plan, myes.
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I can neither confirm nor deny this.
I kept thinking about this when reading.