This story started off on a great premise and now blossoming into a nightly read.
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I'm rather enjoying this. It's been an interesting read to see Twilight fall from grace. Always loved those.

6261888 No...not the Second Monocle... Anything but that.

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Hmm. This is actually starting to look like a diamond amongst glass. Hay, licensing issues nonwithstanding this could make a decent novel.

wow this is great it invoked alot of emotions from me and was well written i look forward to more :D

I feel like I'm going to be using an evil chuckle, but right now it's to feelly to do so.

OKAY! Definitely gonna keep reading this. I think reading this traumatized me, I can't begin to think about what it did to Twilight.

What did her folks do to get in debt to the mob, anyway? It doesn't sound like gambling or drugs or anything, they both seem to be gainfully employed, and most people don't go to Stabby Jim's Usury and Extortion Ltd. when they have trouble paying off their JC Penny's card.

In the name that all that is Good... I hope Twilight turns this mob into dust.

Aaaaand hooked!

I'm kinda confused why Twilight didn't correct Celestia, she should have no feeling over killing these mobsters, in fact, she should be angry at Celestia for not trying harder to hold down crime. but no she is the pacifist she has always been, and for some reason the only reason to kill monsters like them is because magic corrupted your young mind

Throne above... Those... THOSE BASTARDS!
Astartes.... WE HUNT!

Rip and tear....

yass twilight kill em