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So the mastermind is outsmarted. There's a first.
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Even Twilight can't predict everything.
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I already have plans for the Canterlot Wedding, and let's just say...it gets interesting.
Okay, i have nothing to say to that. That's just funny.
tht kind of reminds me of something.....
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7826985 Oh, I do hope it's the good kind of interesting, where Twilight keeps being a badass. I'm still kinda bummed out after the Zecora thing.
Really like the contrast in the different types of love being shown in this chapter: love being given to a friend sexually, love being forced and love being given maternally to a child. In some ways it's like Twilight's life in this story. One big soap opera. Really like he layout and style of your writing. Keep up the brilliant work!
Can't wait for Discord and the Canterlot Wedding. Boy, they are gonna be a fun filled ride!
I was expecting Zephyr Breeze and a 'What is s/he doing here!?'
Boy was I wrong.
it is always the quite ones
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Duel upon the ramparts and a strong appearance of Moondancer. That's all I'm gonna say.
Twi can't be a hundred-percent badass all the time though, sorry to say. Even badasses have those moments where they get duped and wrecked.
I wonder if Spike will follow Twilight's footsteps as an assassin.
Something tells me that Twilight's going to go looking for and recruit this free-thinking changeling that Chryssie was looking for if he's both a good infiltrator and able to hide himself from the hivemind as it is starting to appear.
And the fact that Twilight is already aware of changelings and Chrysalis.....things are going to go so much better (and worse) than it did in the show.
Also, being erovores you would think that a changeling would be better at actually being nice to those around her to coerce those positive feelings to be directed at them naturally. Chrysalis really isn't very good at that. Methinks she's more than a bit of a sadist.
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Free-thinkers are called defective because they're born with a significantly more independent personality, and as they get older, their connection to the hivemind fades away as their individuality becomes more pronounced. Usually once they hit the age of fifteen, they're given some supplies (if supplies can be afforded) and they're exiled from the hive under threat of death if they ever return. They have no place in her 'perfect unity'.
This changeling chose to leave early of its own free will, and stole love on the way out. It's got some balls.
7828233 Which makes it exactly the sort of individual this Twilight would be looking to recruit based on how things have gone thus far.
why do I think fluttershy is a changeling,
also twilight you and fluttershy need to be togeather,
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NEVER!!!
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The language is Zebrican. Twilight speaks it fluently.
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GIVE ME THE FUCKING ANSWER, OR YOU'RE GOING TO DIE! IN 5 MINUTES!
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7827561 Of course. Even Arny got his ass kicked a few times
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To be more accurate, it's Zebrikaans. Actually, that was mentioned when Twilight was talking about her immersion in Zebrican culture.
7836748 I mean one I could use in google translate so I have some idea of what is SOUNDS like she's saying, like Gadget and russian.
7836748 Oh, and where's my fucking answer? Or I'll spam your feed with so much cute adorableness that even Twilight would have a heart attack from it!
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No idea, really. I used Google Translate, so once again, that should tell you everything you need to know. I know I sure as fuck don't know anything about Latin.
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Glad to hear you like it! I'm also glad you understand that an AU means this thing could go anywhere at any time. I still don't understand how people can get upset over that when that's the very nature of an AU story.
Nice chapter, good work.
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I specifically wrote that entire paragraph of the most old-school purple prose just so I could write that last line about it.
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eh, AU gonna AU. Some people will buy into it, some won't. Personally, I wasn't sold. Enough people seem to like the fic that I don't want to make it invisible by downvoting. That's all I was saying.
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The ending is a LONG ways off. Hopefully, you'll stick around until then!
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I like the sound of this changeling.
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Definitively wouldn't put it past this Twilight. Exciting times seem to be insuring.
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Just makes it all the more, unpredictably, interesting.
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Most certainly will.
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I see. That is very kind of you. (I'm sure I'll find something more to your liking.)
shouldn't that be have five kids?
Also, nice chapter. I found myself about as frustrated as Twilight with the Queen's refusal to answer questions quickly (it's as though she's aware she's just here for foreshadowing, and is desperately trying to pad her screentime), but a very fun encounter. I look forward to Twilight actually being somewhat sane and constructing rational arguments instead of just screaming "You're EVIL!" in the wedding.
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Not to mention we must keep in mind that Twilight cares enough about her brother to keep him entirely in the dark about her activities, to the point of hiding her issues with their parents from him for her entire life.
The Canterlot Wedding is NOT going to end well for Chrysalis.
Good god this is the quite literally the story I want to inject directly into my bloodstream. I read all the chapters in like 2 days. And now I got something to look forward to in the future lol. TWILIGHT EX MAFIA FTW
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Glad to hear that you enjoy it so much! There's plenty more where that came from.
make me wonder how bad the queen going to be beat up and broken after twilight though with her after the royal wedding if it happens.
This is likely the best of the bad girl Twilights I've seen so far, and I've been around a while.
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Thanks! I'm trying to hang on to that bad girl persona of hers without going over the top. Hopefully we can 'return to form' with her very soon.
I'm getting a very 'Queen Mab' vibe from Chrysalis...
Preach..