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I love seeing Twilight interacting with the varies ponies (and other beings) that's she's met during her earlier days, her "friends." First we had Octy and Vinyl, and now we have Shady Wings. We get to have a peek into her past in her dealings with others, and I love it.
I'm wondering how many of the Mane Six she's planning to drag into this.
Wonder how long until Shady Wings bites it.
Wondering so hard about Luna.
This story is wonderful.
Why are you so offensive toward everything that somehow related to Russia? Calling and making Stalliongrad "a shithole" for example. Are you a racist? I see that you have problems with frustration of a sexual inclination, but every person should have some value of decensy.
Fun fact: originally the Everfree forest was supposed to be an ever-encroaching threat on ponyville, but that idea was scrapped for whatever reasons.
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...I can't tell if you're joking, but just in case you're not, I'll say this: I have nothing against Russians. Like, at all.
can i just say this twilight makes me hard 0.media.collegehumor.cvcdn.com/29/58/53696daf830733a5e341dc6202b41d99.jpg rock hard
6961897 It only makes sense that Stalliongrad is the shithole. In Equestrian they would neglect the north due to their lifestyle. It's almost as if you called people out on having Detroit in their stories because it's a good setting for anything to do with abandoned buildings. If you're joking, good on ya.
hahaha now we just need luna to confess her love to twilight lol
Awesome chapter. Like coldsilverd said, I love seeing Twilight interact with her old friends/acquaintances like this
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Well, there are legitimate story reasons that Stalliongrad is a shithole, though what you said is a fairly minor reason for it. Honestly, someone actually believing I'm racist because I'm using a play on a Russian city's name as the piss-poor city in my story is pretty ridiculous in my mind. I've never been to Russia, and I sure as hell haven't done research on the place. I'm just coming up with pony-themed cities...like New Yoke! Or Detrot!
Let me see if I got this Ice Shade Station place right; it's an old military outpost, which is now a small town. It acts as a cross-roads for the trains and has a highish class hotel (which allows smoking, what the hell?) along with several... like low class joints?
Is everyone in the hotel going to Stalliongrad, or is there some kind of ski resort on the same track?
It's a pity that bears aren't sentient in this canon, could've had like some kind of big Russian bear pun. Alternatively you could have that actually happen and have Fliuttershy's bear be like a `Hodor` type character.
Anyway, I'm just rambling, good chapter. But the best part is that jazz, listening to it right now. Thank you very much.
6962649 that makes sense. Never heard New Yoke before.
6962932 it was just one I hadn't heard before is all.
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You can smoke at any high class hotel...
as long as you pay enough $$
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Especially back in the 1950s. They practically encouraged that shit.
6962769 yeah not smoking in public is a recent thing. Those old timey jazz clubs were so shrouded in smoke for a reason and it wasn't a smoke machine.
I'm just waiting for the reveal that Celestia's mind-ripping Twilight. This story keeps going over the top, and I can't think of anything more grimderp than that.
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I can't tell if this is supposed to be a negative comment or not. I'm not bothered by it, I'm just not sure what you're trying to say.
I mean I don't think it is, but still.
6971682 Perhaps a bit of both? He makes a point this story is a bit over the top sometimes. For the most part you make it work, Well I might add. Over the top can be brilliant when it's intentional, and sometimes even if it's not. After all, "everyone loves Giant robots fighting dinosaurs".
But you could stand to have another chapter or so where you tone it down a bit. It seems like Everything Twilight does and everyone she knows is Epic or major or intense in someway. Meets with an old friend almost turns into a shootout, Spends the night with fluttershy and it turns into her revealing one of her most personal secrets to all her new friends (though I agree with how that one played out) even the Whole thing with Vine and octy? Yeah was kinda sweet but again, over the top. It seems like almost every character she interacts with or meets has some Crazy Grim-dark or hyper-sexual backstory.
And okay yeah She's ex-mafia, Theres gonna be a lot of that stuff in her life but that doesn't mean she can't have one or two more Normal friends, or even people who have Been involved in darker things without those things being so extreme. Even in the mafia there are guys who never really get their hands dirty, just Guard doors or drive cars, They don't all have to be psychopaths or Rape/attempted murder victims you know?
It also might also be nice to (Obviously after the current arc is finished) See a "day in the life" chapter or two, Where we'd have a chance to get to know your world and characters a little bit more Outside of the criminal/underground element. See twi just Being Celestias protege or Spikes mom for a chapter. You've set a hard and fast pace And I can get behind a story where the plot progresses constantly but sometimes you need to take a step back and do a short character development arc.
That said, it's not my story, and obviously you are going somewhere with it. I like it so far, It's been consistently good and I'm not trying to tell you otherwise, just, Making observations and suggestions, Either way i'm not gonna stop reading it any time soon and I'm excited to reach the beginning again and see what happens after that.
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Awesome story so far, great work.
Is there no number intentionally?
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Yup, because I was too lazy to get into specifics of temperature, because my brain is a crazy place of branching thoughts such as 'What temperature does fur begin to freeze?' and 'How long can a horse survive in below-zero temperatures without shelter?' and 'I wonder how a heat shield spell would hold up to a hailstorm of snow?'
I hope that there is a reconciliation with Twi's parents at some point, it sucks so much what they all went through..
So, you just created the Cris Cyborg of ponies.
This can only end well...
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Who's Cris Cyborg?
Hmmmm? What did time do to you twilight? Why does it deserve to die?
... I feel this is something pinkie would ask with a sincerity that would baffle and bamboozle even celestia
Then wouldn't you be called Speed Reader? Or something like Magenta Splarkler?