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*Stupid Cliff hanger.*
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annnnd they banged
While not on board with Twilight taking it, I'm still okay with it, dood.
They're soooo gonna fuck...
It's kinda funny: Futa on female is probably my second favorite (specific) fetish, but Futa on Futa, while not being a turn off, is way down the list of what I like, Male on Futa is somewhat of a turn off, and I don't even wanna talk about Futa on Male. Of course, everything is different when there's only text without any pictures, like I actually did enjoy the griffon part.
I give it an hour tops before they're fucking. Also, Twilight didn't mention putting her disguise on, so is she going to show Gadget what she really looks like or did she just not mention that?
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I'm glad to hear it! Would you believe that both of those sex scenes weren't intended at all? I mean, the griffon one was meant to come up at some point, but I didn't intend to have it in this chapter. But, as I continued working on it, I realized that both would serve a very good purpose here, so I put them in.
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That...was an oversight on my part, actually. I should probably go fix that. Thanks for pointing that out!
So wait, when she's talking about that sparring match, she says she'll only use telekinesis. Not only is that inconsistent with a later comment about having punched him in the gut, but how the heck would that reassure him?
Basically, you wrote 'only' instead of wouldn't.
Also, what sort of roll are you on? How long has it been since the last chapter?
EDIT: Five. Days.
Holy shit, dude.
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Well, she did mention claw-to-hoof combat as well. She meant that she wouldn't use any magic other than telekinesis.
As for the roll I'm on, I've been trying to put out a chapter within the range of just a week. This one came out four days after the last one.
EDIT: I know, right? I'm shocked too.
7013059 Ah. That makes sense. Perhaps the text could use a tweak or two.
7013105
Potentially. I could take a quick look at that.
EDIT: fixed, methinks.
I'm totally lusting over my own character. Is that weird? I think that's pretty weird.
Also, for anyone wondering, I've actually had ZERO input about Gadget in this story. None. I've been asked opinions, but I have never once said "I want Gadget to do/be this." And so far it's been absolutely amazing.
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I know your character well, ma pĂȘche.
7013109 Yes, that is indeed fixed.
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It is rare that one's words can be trusted over one's actions. One's thoughts.
7013131
Nah. I lust after my own characters all the time. ;3
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...It wasn't even cryptic. The heck? All I said was that regardless of what people might say, their actions and thoughts usually mean far more than their words.
It's much like one entry in a book i read; Thomas Edison, in his younger years, asked his teacher SO many questions that it nearly drove her crazy. So his mother tutored him and set him on a different path. sure, he stopped going to school. but he never stopped learning and growing!
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Eeexactly! It's a shame school doesn't allow for such things. The world isn't the same way it used to be, but schools are still archaic in their teaching methods. We learn things, sure, but how important is knowing calculus to the average student, compared to far more useful life experiences that someone will be more likely to use every single day?
Seems to be a sort of role reversal with Twilight in this scene.
In most of the story we've seen Twilight as very sexually confident, e.g. her first meeting with Nightmare Moon where she was just flaunting her stuff, and the various sex jokes she has throughout the story. Here Twilight meets someone who is just as sexually confident as she is; Gadget struts over to her with a huge erection covered in saliva and kisses her. And she doesn't know what to make of it. Twilight seems to act somewhat flustered in this situation, and more so later (much more so later, that was hilarious). Probably goes further than just sex, Gadget seems an interesting counter-weight to Twilight.
Looking forward to seeing how this goes.
Also looking forward to insight into Twilight's apparent domination fetish (is that a fetish, or just like a preference?)
Great work as always.
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Well, a fetish in terms of sex is something that you need, if I'm remembering correctly. A kink is simply a preference. So considering how many times she's had sex with random one-nighters where she was the one in control, I don't think it's an outright fetish for her.
Wondering if anyone else has made the connection between the referance to Gadget in the prologue, meaning she might become her permenant lover or close friend after this....
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Nice, wouldn't have caught that myself been awhile since I read that. Liking Gadget a lot already.
Slightly out of the blue, but is anypony else looking forwards to seeing what ol' mix and match has to say to her?
I cracked up so much readin' this line.