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Huzzah! Glad to see an update, and now I'm excited for the next one. Your action scenes have been well written, so I look forward to seeing Twilight's skills again vs. the recruits.
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. A+ work.
Just watch, there's gonna be that ONE asshole that tries to punch her in the face.
Will this story have any sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?
i just hope we can get more than 2 chapters a year and not so far apart either
She ain't wrong!
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It also works for Chrysalis.
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Also,
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this is not going to end well for the recruits
good story
As for the Night Guard, well...
Funny you should say that. My favourite theory.....
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A great amount of exposition... Which is often lacking in other stories on this site.
Go for broke!
FIGHT!
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Not sure. While the sex does matter, I only plan on writing sex scenes that actually impact character development. Thus why I haven't written sex scenes for either of her times with Fluttershy, or any of her random meaningless flings she's had with strangers.
update :o
RIP Guard Recruits 2018-2018
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They never saw it comin'. Literally.
This is going to be brutal, so so brutal.
Sounds like this is going to be absolute torture for Gadget.
Aw man, I'm gonna get the shit kicked outta me, aren't I?
(Or rather, this version of me. You know what I mean.)
It's good to see this story updated, i like the plot and practically everything. This spar session with the recruits gonna be very interesting
Poor poor recruits
aaaah shit son!
Awww I wanna see what happens!
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Oh, hun...you and I both know that Gadget getting her ass kicked is kinda her job!
I'm sad it ended where it did: I was looking forward to some smack-down. Hope there's at least a few paragraphs in the next chapter
So all the chapters are from Twilight's point of view? Really hard to tell.
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All except for the interludes. I'm not sure how that's hard to tell, you seem to be the first and only person to comment about having a problem with that.
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I just thought it was from another pony's point of view, before I saw Twilight's name.
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Ah, alright then.
Time to knock some knuckleheads around like ragdolls.
And so I finally reach the latest chapter. Considering I've been binge reading this, it's going to suck waiting for the next one.
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A very unfortunate problem that all readers go through at one point or another. Even I, a lowly author, have experienced it time and time again.
I feel your pain, my friend.
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What I'm saying is that in all odds, they're probably too young to be reading something like this. I don't really care if young people read this, but if they're doing something they aren't supposed to do, you'd think they'd at least have the presence of mind to avoid blatantly giving themselves away.
Having gone through boot camp two times for different branches of the US mitary, I can state with some authority that at least 70% of all drill sergeants are sadists.
That said, nothing quite so satisfying as the happy grin and congratulations from the meanest of them once you make it through.
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I have personally never been through boot camp. My only exposure is through movies and media, which is why Barbut is only slightly channeling Full Metal Jacket here.
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I did Marines with JROTC in high school. Full Metal Jacket got a drill sergeant of that era very well. They aren't allowed to say some of the things he said in that anymore...but physical challenges are honestly harder than the movie ever showed or implied.
Glad to see this updated. This version of Twilight is always fun to read about as it's one of the more unique ways I've ever seen her portrayed throughout all the fiction that I've read on this site. Looking forward to the next update and incoming fight scene. Keep up the great work.
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ok thanks for that, i was getting worried you left a loophole or something
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You know the actor who portrayed Gunnery Sgt Hartman passed away.
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I had heard that already, unfortunately. He was very skilled.