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That moment when Twilight answers Celestia's question ("Are you a threat to my subjects?") was extremely well-written. Really gave me the chills and made me feel tense. Keep up the good work!
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Why, thank you! I actually feel like I was more in my element in this chapter. More descriptiveness, less dialogue, which is a lot easier for me to write. Glad it came out okay!
I'm glad Twilight and Celestia are starting to work things out and are talking to each other again.
I wonder how Gadget will do in the Royal guards. Hopefully her condition doesn't cause any problems.
I'm hoping that Twilight has the chance to bang Celestia (and maybe have Gadget join and they double team Celestia).
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Its nice that Luna is being the voice of reason for Celestia. Its pretty obvious that looking back to Luna's talk with Celestia about having a 'dark knight' take down the Mafia was taken into account... Though I wonder when the prologue is going to happen... Before or after she becomes queen of Equestrian crime?
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The prologue is a long ways off, let's put it that way.
Well-written. Good story. Love where it's going.
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Celestia's response there reflects just how good she is at what she does - Twilight was probably tempted to spill right then, and she's going to be less cautious around Celestia in the future.
Wait, did Celestia just give Twilight the go ahead to wipe out the Mafia? I think she did! Awesome!
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It's more accurate to say that Celestia turned a blind eye. She is not okay with this whatsoever.
7202885 eh, that's close enough in my book
Translation for gadget line anypony?
And shenanigans ensue...
Gotta give you props on that scene with Celestia, well done.
Celestia gives the best hugs.
You've done it again, another great chapter.
Onwards to Ponyville
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In short: "What in Tartarus?" , or more eloquently put: What the BUCK?
7202006 ooo that sounds fun.
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I'm actually shocked that no one's asked for a translation of the full Russian/Gradios sentences Gadget spoke in the last chapter.
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Eh, perhaps! Of course, I also don't necessarily want readers going through the story not knowing what a character said in certain parts either. As mentioned previously, I wouldn't trust most online translation programs with entire sentences.
7203619 pls.
im not gonna translate the last bit but... im geussing means "what the fuck"
7212123 I tried to use Google and another website but I think they were both wrong
"Something attractive?"
And
"That tar tar"
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Actually, it's meant to say 'What in Tartarus?'
I have said it once and I will say it again: don't trust Google Translate to translate anything beyond single words effectively.
7213466 her der I know that, I use several sites usually to work out translations but I've never touched Russian before so I pretty much just ignore anything you have her say in Russian and hope it's in the comments.
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And you get exactly what you asked for :). Problem is that while every single word was right together they make no sense. Hm... You need something like... "Какого Тартара!?"
7213466 Even then it might fuck up-one time I put......something in, English to German, and when I switched it back, it gave me winch.
I kind of pictured Twilight's brace like this:
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7285594 No, she's definitely Bane.
That was quite the black joke.