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yay~<3 and cute. but also sad that twilight can't stay ;c and will she ever tell celestia her past? :Ccc I can't wait for another chapter.
hell yeah sexy time at fluttershy's
Please let that body be Luna or Celestia.
Heh heh Lol fluttershy
Why can I not give this story more than one thumbs up?
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Because life's not fair. :(
Fluttershy!? Really!? I mean, that'd be awesome, but it'd be even more awesome if all the girls were there.
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What, the Rainboom that brought them all together?
To be fair, Celestia, she kinda has a point.
Nice, a simple enough wrap up for the story arc and I think you tied up most of the loose ends nicely.
Cool to see Twilight actually be a little mad at Celestia manipulating her, canon Twilight would never even think about arguing with Celestia or displeasing her in any way. I'm wondering how Celestia knew about Twilight shooting to kill in the first place, was it just Luna telling her afterwards or could Celestia somehow see from her banishment? Anyway Celestia also now knows that her personal student is a murderer and worked for the mafia, I won't believe that Twilight managed to hide everything well enough that a thousand year old immortal absolute monarch can't eventually find it if she really wanted to so she'll definitely have fun explaining that.
Luna seems to be having quite a bit of fun so far but I highly doubt she'll have quite as good of a time/ be quite as accepted in Canterlot. I know you mentioned she's quite small and meek currently but I'm fully expecting she'll eventually be back to full strength like in the show and she'll probably fill out quite nicely then too.
The party was fun, a little disappointing that it wasn't a full blown orgy but you can't win 'em all I suppose. Nice to see Celestia let loose a little bit and nice to see that the Apple family can wrangle up a "Saved the world" feast at the drop of a hat.
Now probably the most significant part of the chapter and something I've been wondering while reading your story for quite a while: whether or not Twilight would be staying in Ponyville. I always sort of figured she wouldn't be able to stay in Ponyville like in the show, she's got too many connections and responsibilities to others and herself in Canterlot to go live in Ponyville no matter how tempting it would be. I'm happy to see her going back but I'm unsure entirely what this whole adventure will mean for her afterwards, I don't know if Twilight learned anything in particular from the adventure apart from just how much a shithole Canterlot is comparatively. Twilight herself seems to be perhaps getting a little soft hearted after all these good deeds and nice ponies and I could see her getting stabbed in the back when she gets to Canterlot by the mafia looking to possibly make use of her again. I'm also sort of expecting the Elements of Harmony to not have a very big role in future events since Twilight won't be together with the other five all the time to keep their friendship strong, even if they all kept in touch by letter or something I don't see them being very close with Twilight when she's all the way in Canterlot.
I'm probably rambling a little bit due to tiredness but I liked the arc and the writing was decent, I'm still looking forward to Pinkie explaining her ability to use mind magic so don't try and slip that one past me! Definitely excited to get back to Canterlot and get this train back on the original rails .
Well, aside from the obvious, this is already taking a different and interesting turn.
And I vote for Princess Luna in bed with Twilight. By Twilight's own admission, she's a horny bugger without her meds, and Luna's gone over a thousand years with either nothing or only her hoof.
I would also tend to guess Luna, but I dont know why they would have ended up in Flutter's bed. So *shrug* I guess I have to wait for the next chapter. Wouldn't it be interesting if it were Celestia instead of Luna ;-)
You never said it was a warm pony body. She could just be snuggling with Spike. Or, since it's Fluttershy's house, one of her animals like Harry the bear.
Ooooorrrr she got some of that Lunar Lovin'
Flutterlight? Naw, I ship TwiLuna.
Since you said "enjoy speculating", and that it's Fluttershy's house, I very much doubt that it's Fluttershy. I can't imagine any other pony would use Shy's bed, though, maybe RD, an animal is a pretty good choice, some animal that makes Twi nervous - manticore or bear perhaps. Luna or Celestia wouldn't make sense, since they were already in the chariot towards the end or, at least, Luna, and again, why would they use Shy's bed... Then again with Fluttershy, the way you wrote that sentence, with her bed partner being mentioned first before the owner of the bed, makes it look like the owner is the conclusion, which would be Fluttershy, still - too easy. I'm gonna say either Fluttershy, RD, or a bear.
6721779 That's true. I suppose it was the lesser of two evils?
Think you're missing a word between records and documents.
I don't care who the warm body is, so long as they remember last night in just enough detail to make horndog Twilight Sparkle blush like a beetroot.
And I'm glad she's leaving Ponyville behind. It's a sanctuary, a small town that somehow avoided corruption, where ponies trust each other and wear their hearts on their sleeves. Best case scenario, she lets Spike stay, and goes back to Canterlot to do her wetwork.
6721925 Touche. She'll regain the points in Twilight's book again, and she'll get over Twilight nearly killing Luna, but it was much better than the alternative.
Ha! She ended up in Ponyville anyway..
Like her face off with both Princesses.
Now shouldn't her leg be healed like Rarity's tail?
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Regrowing a tail is one thing, but fixing a more serious injury like her crippled leg? That's beyond the scope of what the Elements are capable of doing.
6722152 Bull. they can restore Luna to her true self. Put Discord in Stone, and assist in asscending Twilight to alicorn in canon. I think they can heal her leg.
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Well, you can choose to believe that if you want, but you're wrong. Canonically, we've never seen them actually harm anyone, or heal anyone beyond a cut-off tail. The way I see them, they are based on the intent of those wielding them, and since they only choose those worthy of them....
6722190 well second flag after the rainboom.
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...You are aware that this is an AU, right? If you want everything to go the same way the show did, then why not just re-watch the show?
6722254 I expect some alterations but I see messing with the signifigance of the Rainboom an unessecary change.
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Well, if you say so. That's not the direction the story's taking though.
dammmmnnnn moar please
Sprong!
Gee whiz I wonder who she's waking up with in Fluttershy's bed? Such mystery
I totally don't know the answer already because I proofread this story, what makes you think that
I'm kinda sad Twi doesn't stay, 'cause it would probably be better for her... but that's not what this story is about.
You just know it's Angel. He's just waiting for Twi to wake up so he can bunny-kick her in the junk.
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...I hadn't thought of that, and I wish I did because that idea is hilarious.
You win a fucking internet, good sir!
Well, my guess is it's Spike. Surely Fluttershy gave them the bed, or at least didn't complain when it was stolen, because she could never say no to tired baby Spike
6722184 100% with one right here... Or maybe a bear (i have my reasons)
Edit: also agree with mugen.
Hahahahaha You have a great sense of humor pal. I like this story.
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My sense of humor is apparently very snarky and dry. Glad you like it though!
6746748 Well I am a person who likes weird humor so you are in luck.
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I'd almost prefer it if Twilight had replied to Celestia, "I was forced, too young, to work for the Mafia," ... it would allow her statement of not liking being manipulated to make more sense.
I feel like this sentence is a bit of a mess.
It was at this moment Twilight knew, She Fucked up.
How the HELL did no one catch the Thor reference?! It is only one of the most memed scenes in film?
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Oh I'm fine with sex scenes. I just mentioned it cause I commented on a chapter that had sex in it.
That said, you lay on the meta wayyyyyyyyy too much. After all the shit Twilight has been up to in her youth, after sparing the guardsmen, after playing softball with Twilight and her friends half a dozen times, after literally shooting Nightmare Moon in the head; we're supposed to side with Twilight cause 'eternal night would kill the plant life and thus the ecosystem'? If the first 10 chapters were a standalone, OCs-only story, it would be a horrible story.
I'm... Gonna put this on hold, I kinda wish it was less of the whole make friends sorta thing, and more of the sadistic badass Twilight sorta thing... Maybe if I have nothing left to read, I'll come back to this, but for now, I'm putting it down.