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Nice to see it takes Fluttershy to get inside that Twilight has made. I love how this is progressing! Onwards!
to quote Silver Quill...
Okay, i'm officially dubbing her Nan. (also, you get a point for that. you're at 3 bonus points on this story so far.)
Why? to paraphrase Chibi Neko....
Certainly wasn't fucking expecting that first line while I was in school.
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Any body part that acts up or was injured can have good and bad days. My knees like to swell up with fluids from time to time. Makes it so there's pain and it will no longer support my weight. Have to hobble around with my leg locked strait or I'll collapse right to the ground. For the most part though it works fine with maybe some light aching.
After dealing with it for so many years even at it's worst I can usually ignore it and keep on keeping on. I imagine her hip is a lot like that and shes just learned to live with it.
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Mwee-hee-hee!
I'm not sure muggers move into quiet towns for easy marks. It's not exactly a career populated by good planners. I could see organized crime making decisions like that, but that involves more logistics than just moving I would think.
Ahh, love...
Such an complex feeling and yet so simple... Love has different facets like a jewel, such as a sapphire or a diamond, for example the love between friends differs subtly from love between family, but it can be both yet not at the same time.
Such a beautiful and simple concept to know but hard to understand
7284380 Is it wrong to want to immediately respond with a 12-year-old-emo style poem?
I would hope Twilight doesn't end up the way she did in Soldier of Magic. I did not like that story.
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I've never read that one, so...I wouldn't know.
Now THAT is a beginning of a chapter
small nitpick
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Can't believe I missed that. Fixed!
Hmm, I get the feeling Princess Luna's about to make things difficult again.
7284779 .....na
7284688 That would get very awkward VERY quickly.
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I kinda pictured it as a metal brace on the top of her muzzle. Not particularly big or impeding her ability to speak, but acting as a kind of reinforcement for her snout, since that's the only part of her muzzle that's broken.
7282766 Sweet.
7284779 no, it just offers another viewpoint on love. As i said, love has many facets, and i can only show my facets as i cannot see how you look at love. So go on and give it
Even if it is emo style or whatever, it still is a way of looking and thinking.
7285913 Rereading what I wrote I distinctly forgot to add the word stereotype. It was meant as a bad joke poking fun at 'emos'. (I use the term lightly)
7285915 ahh, i understand. But would you still like make a poem if you want to write one? I'd like to hear one if it's not too much trouble to write one
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Rain pouring down as if to bring a flood
Safe havens of flickering lights dotting the cityscape
Monoliths of concrete towering over all
Silhouettes pantomiming the lives of individuals
The child looking out their window searching for hope
A smoke filled parlor and a game of cards
Lewd acts hidden behind closed doors
Fighting couples hands waving about
Silhouetted against their cloth drapes
The rain carries on careless of the dark city's whims.
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Yeah well, I don't have an Xbone or PS4, so I'm out of luck there as well. Still, fuck it, just gonna save cash and get a beast gaming PC with a solid-state drive and one of those newer NVidia 10 Series graphics cards. Sick of this console shit and things not running like they should.
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She wasn't even in college yet and she already came back with a baby and a tattoo. That's Twilight for you: always ahead of the curve!
Out of all the stories i have read about mlp. This is one of the only 2 stories that if mlp wasn't a little girls show would make an epic darker adult version. Your story is amazing. I hope this goes on for a while I like where this is going as well as how you connect it to real episodes.
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Wow, thanks! That's pretty high praise. I'm aiming for an air of darkness and realism through the characters and the end-goal of the story itself. I'm glad it's coming across so clearly!
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I've not played or seen much Payday 2, so I have no idea what you're talking about.
Aaaarrrrgggg! I can not believe I caught up to you! Now I have to wait!
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this doesn't really have anything to do with the chapter but I'm surprised about how twilight tells us (the readers) and ponies how she doesn't like being seen naked, I'd expect her to use the correct word for it, Gymnophobia.
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Well, she's not really afraid of seeing others naked, and if she's in a disguise it doesn't bother her as long as she's sure no one will find out it's her. It's not really gymnophobia. I mean yes, she constantly wears clothes, but when she's in disguise that's more out of habit than a genuine fear of being seen naked.
7296700 And the other? (Putting my money on Fallout Equestria).
7287021 .......wasn't she, like 14, when she hatched Spike?
7284888 She gets thrown into an AU earth (USA) in 2037, where there is a rebellion going on because the gov. Riggs elections and is super corrupt. But first, She winds up in this Labitory where they experiment on her in some of the most inefficient, fuck up, retarded, and sadistic ways possible, including removing one of her cutie marks. Then, she joins the rebellion, and while she helps them (A LOT), she also expenses so much mental tra am that she winds up being a sadistic psyopath, who is JUST sane enough to know it and controll it so she doesn't wind up killing everyone she cares about. It ends with her getting back to Equestia. (This is technically a lie, since it starts with her coming come, and tells the story with an interlude to the present no and then and stuff, but that's the majority if the story.
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Yyyup.
For some reason. I feel like something bad is about to happen. But I'm probably just used to the idea that if too many peaceful, nice and heartfelt things happen, something bad that is equal to the amount of good that's happened.
7334278 what story is this
7445410 https://www.fimfiction.net/story/310913/soldier-of-magic
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I have read this story b4 and it is really Awsome ps still hoping for the new chapter on "The Soldier and The Empress".
You reference Braeburn once by name before he introduces himself.
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Well, yes. The entire story is a flashback on Twilight's part, so that's not all that strange.
Halfway through the chapter, god that hits me in the feels. I know how Twilight feels and I know people who feel like Twilight feels... It's a trap really. You care about others too much and then you feel like you don't deserve any care in return. We're the ones who die early...
Edit: Also, once again. We didn't see the sex, at least not in it's entirety, but we still understand the significance of it.
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Yes, but that's only because the sex itself held little meaning regarding their relationship. We know it was good, we know it was hot, and they both got exactly what they wanted out of it. That doesn't require any explanation outside of what's already been given. What matters more between the two of them is their relationship outside of the bedroom, even if Fluttershy is one very thirsty pegasus. Nothing happened during the sex that mattered, nor was anything revealed that we didn't already know, such as Twilight's sexual preferences, personality and behavior.