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I am a 24 year old brony from FL. I write stories featuring Fluttershy (BEST PONY!!!), and a few about my favorite ships, 90% being Flimjack. I also have an MLP audio series on my YouTube channel.

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Apple Bloom is a poor little filly living in Ponyville with her Granny Smith, older sister Applejack and older brother, Big Mac. She's tired of the current life she's living and wants something new and exciting to come into her life.

One day, it is announced all over Equestria, that Pinkie Pie, the legendary candy maker, has hid five golden tickets in her candy bars. Whoever possesses the ticket will get the chance to go inside the factory where all of her candy is made.

This could be the excitement that Apple Bloom has been wanting all her life!


Based on the 1971 classic "Willy Wonka" film.

(This cover art is temporary)

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I really enjoyed this one, and I'm looking an update. Got any plans?

6168789 Already got the rest of the story/chapters planned. Just got to write them...

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Phew! Good luck! Hey, if you need any help, I'll lend a hoof.

6168833 awh, thanks. Appreciate it

This gets four out of three Pinkies!:pinkiesmile::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:
And a heart as a bonus.:heart:

'Willy Wonka' is one of my fav musical movies :twilightsmile::heart:

Thank you for knowing the classics :moustache: when I mention Gene Wilder as Willy Wonka, I get nothing but strange looks from people Xb

Shouldn't it be Apple Bloom and The Chocolate Factory?

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No no no. You have to refer to him as the "you get nothing" guy. (just kidding)

6171650 if you want it to be based off of the 2005 remake. This is based off of the original 1971 movie

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Or, y'know, the book by Roald Dahl. The actual original version of the story. Which is called Charlie and The Chocolate Factory.

I mean, I love the 1971 movie too, but the story is Roald Dahl's. The movie is just one of several adaptations, albeit the most well known. And unless you were entirely unaware there was a book, or you're just taking the script and replacing the names, there's no reason to specifically base your pony fanfic crossover off of one specific adaptation of the story you're crossing over with.

Yay, love this movie! ^^

Don't forget what happened to the man who got everything he wanted...

What happened?

He lived happily ever after...

LOVED THAT MOVIE!

Why is this on hiatus?! I WANT MORE!

Comment posted by SYNTH4 deleted Sep 11th, 2017

It would be interesting if you try using some scenes from the Tim Burton version of the Chocolate Factory and make a reference to Cupcakes for a laugh.

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