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Hmm, do I sense some MacDash a-brewin'?
I hope so! You have a pretty good grasp on the characters, and I'm very curious why Mac asked her that.
I am very interested in this story. Looking forward to seeing more from this!
Yes, this pleases me.
This was all good and everything, but the question is unanswered.
...What is glue made of in Equestria?
6121950 Dead pony corpses, duh! They get shipped off to a facility hidden deep within a swamp, this facility is where the wonder glue is made! Sticks just about everything to anything!
6122147 I would imagine it's the hooves that don't get processed into rainbows.
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6122558 I see the reference went way over your head....
6122592 Nothing goes over my head, my reflexes are to fast, I would... catch it.
6122602 Ugh, you did not. you did not!
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You're goddamned right.
6122147 Ironic that's exactly word for word what I was gonna take a shot at comedic-wise
6123368 Oh? Guess i'm slightly psychic! or somethin'...
Oooh, this is really good :D
Rainbow Dash telling someone they have a lack of tact......alright.
Good going so far, hope to see more soon.
That was deep and sweet.
so far so good. hope to see more soon.
=Best word in this story
Really good story keep like this.
Yaas, step one o them falling madly in love complete
Just a small note, Dash would have pink not purple eyes
Aw, c'mon Mac, you've still got that Ponytones thing! You're not a COMPLETE social hermit!
I predict that she's going to do something reckless in a hilarious manner, now it's just playing the waiting game and i'm hoping than i'm right
I enjoy this story more and more!
She's going to ask Celestia to turn Mac into an Alicorn, isn't she?
Luna might back that move, if you know what I mean.
Rainbow Dash, do something reckless? PSHAW. Nonsense. Nonsense, I say!
How long have you known Rainbow Dash exactly, Twilight?
Of course it's going to be something reckless...and totally awesome!
They could try turning him into a breezie for a little while.
Recklessness ensured
Wow, this took a dark turn damn quick...
Let's see where it goes!
He'll be fine I'm sure, at least the tree broke his fall. He'll have a concussion and be up in no time ...
6148429 Nah, he dead. :/
Huh...Hello sudden dark turn!
I thought that Rainbow wouldn't have gotten him very high and just had him break a leg or something. How high did she end up getting him because they did an awful lot in the time it took for him to hit the ground?
Oh well, this'll be more interesting, I'm sure!
Well, Twilight's magic may be no good for helping earth ponies fly, but I'm sure it'll be more useful for helping piece together a skeleton from itty-bitty pieces!
And if not, well, Applejack will probably murder Dash, so at least they can be buried together!
...well based on the tags either this is going to get drastically darker, or he survived just enough for sex. So assuming he is alive, everything should be fine.
Very good chapter! Keeping me interested so far!
Me Gusta Mucho!
So is Mac in a coma or is he just sleeping? I dn't think you've established that...
...Though I'd guess coma. Still a good chapter though and I await the next one (I've never used a Rarity emoticon before )
Look at it this way, Dash. You gave him a chance to fly AND you gave him a month off from his chores!
HAH!
Okay, but seriously, you told Mac to trust you and you destroyed him. FEEL THE SHAME.
Feels, they hurt
I am really liking this. You feel the building connection between the two. Had Mac said something like this to Rainbow before she started helping him, she likely would have just thought him an idiot and then put the whole thing out of her mind. Here it actually hurts her deeply that he would undervalue his own happiness so much
It ain't over 'till the uhhh.....
fat lady flies? I got nothin'
Nope, you're in some deep shit now Mac
Can he go in the hot air balloon Twilight arrived in? And then like ... parachute down?
You're losing your chance to make her do that again Mac. Stop it.
God, this story has me shouting "Just kiss her!" So this is very good! Keep up the good work!
Well, that, and a LITTLE negligence.
I mean, seriously, she didn't even CONSIDER the possibility of something going wrong mid-flight.
And he never felt more dead than after that instant! (Rimshot)
I kind of feel like the subtle point about the value and necessity of social interaction may have been lost among the less subtle conflict regarding physics. It's hard to look at the accident and think "yeah, I guess that's what happens when you try to get out more. You plummet a hundred feet to the ground and break half your skeleton."
Whyyyyyyyyy!!!!!! why it is cancelled!!!!!????
6546325 I started it with the intention of just leading into a mature scene, hence the decision to make it anthro, but really felt like I had an idea for something more on it, but didn't want to continue on with how I had it set up. So I'll be making a different MacDash fic soon to better touch on the emotional interaction.
6546932 oh! ok then! sorry to react like that.
6546994 It's fine, makes me quite happy really to go ahead and see people were that interested in it.
6547012 It's still in my tracking list. :P
How would this story have ended?