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KarmaDash
Favourite ship ever ... MacinDash That is all you need to know.
KarmaDash
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Wow! This was very well done, KD! You really nailed Dash's perspective, and her character, as far as her not really wanting to let go, but letting herself.
Nice job!
Wow, this was beautiful, everything was though action. I love it, some minor mistakes that makes me re-read the some paragraph but other than that... this is going to favs.
Very well done! Good character set up, and an amazing job of doing Dash’s POV.
This was really good! Great work!
6155461 Thank you ^^
6154740 Thanks, if your all lucky I might add a follow up chapter ;)
6154633 Ahh thanks, Yeah I have a horrible habit of over-editing when I beta my own fics so I though I would play it safe this time (Feel free to PM me the errors to fix)
6154095 OMG Thats one of the best compliments I've ever gotten, thanks Jake
Y'know, this is pretty good. It's just that you really need an editor.
Pretty good, although the premise holds way more potential than the actual story explores.
Dash and Mac hooking up just for sex and then actually growing to confide in and care for each other is a story that deserves telling in-depth, rather than being quickly explained in the middle of a make-out session.
This is kind of a pet peeve of mine with relation to romance stories; it annoys me when the reader is dropped on top of an already-happy couple just so the narrative can show off how hot they are for each other. I prefer the journey to the destination.
Still, it's worth an upvote.
I actually enjoyed this and I don't usually go for stuff like this.
Also, is it wrong that I want to Applejack's reaction to this?
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Thank you ^^
I didn't add a romance tag for that reason, it was just something that popped into my head and I carried on writing when inspiration came.
I took a small poll on my page and I will be writing two chapters one about the very start of how their relationship happened, and the other about how that started to develop how they began to care for each other.
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Thanks, I am planning on writing an installment where AJ walks in not long after this scene and catches them haha
Well in terms of clop it was pretty cool and it does lay out the start of the 'relationship' quite well, but she seemed to jump to 'getting a quickie' quite quickly (no pun intended) I felt it could have been expanded a bit more...
...or maybe that's just me wishing for more to read. Either could be the case, really.
Great chapter and I know what I voted for so I hope that'll be the outcome!
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Thanks, yeah I was having issue with drawing out her idea, but in the end nothing stuck so I went for the easiest route.
I'm hoping to start writing and get the next chapter out within the next few weeks, hooves crossed ;)
...Again, a great read but I would've liked a little bit of elaboration on Dash's first boyfriend and why she hates him so much. But still, a solid chapter and, if there is another as the chapter kinda ends on a cliffhanger, I'll be in tune to read :)
(Also, just in case you didn't know I updated MacDash Chronicles as well)
Keep on writing you crazy KarmaDash
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Thanks, I'm probably going to go back and elaborate on the section where he's mentioned (Bu this creative block has been driving me insane that I can' get anything down.
The nest two chapter are the right before and after scenes so I don't plan on any cliffys
Oooh, I'll go read it now :D
Now that's a start.
I mean, it's more than a bit clichéd, meeting in a bar while one partner was smarting from a breakup, but it's fitting and gets the job done. Nice one.
It's nice of Rainbow to keep to a schedule. It makes it SO much easier on the career-oriented sex friend! Whatta pal!
Is this chapter suppose to be what had happened just before chapter one? Because they seem like they fit together well.
And I didn't really expect another chapter, I thought it was already finished. Doesn't mean it wasn't good, cause it was, I just had to read through the other chapters to remember what had happened.
Good job Karma, can't wait for your new story!
MacDash forever! (It just occured to me that the shipping name sounds like Ronald McDonald entered the Grand Prix
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6668371 Yeah i tool a poll months ago (shame on me for taking so long) and theres one more left to come ^^
Haha, I just see the innuendo Mac-IN-Dash XD ... Gosh i'm a terrible person
but... before that...
how did he do that? I she that flexible???
And I'm just curious... what is her breast size?
Marble Pie disapproves of your ship, Karmadashie
6716400 well Marble pie can take a running jump of a cliff that leads into the deepest pits of hell and burn for all I care
6675405 /for some reason I never got a notification for this comment/
Well picture yourself sat at the bottom of a staircase, facing across slightly at the stair your on instead of stait ahead, then lean back, and youd be be able to lean back against the stairs.
Her bust isn't that large or small, but is in the smaller size of the "regular" spectrum in my mind. Feel free to imagine her in any other way.
6716621 *places one hand over his chest in an expression of hurt... Before running away, arms and hands flailing hysterically*
Great conclusion! Sorry to take so long to read!
6716400 She and Fluttershy can get together, they are clones
Now that I've taken time to read this, I'm glad I did. You've a talent for illustrating the affections between these two, who have a relationship that has surpassed a need for just physical gratification. Just don't forget to edit your work. That's the only criticism I can think of.
6721624 thanks dude :)
I've been in the midst of a new human AU story, and I've already decided not to publish it untill the whole thing has been written, so I can get an editor and my have to worry about my shitty skills haha
6723042 XD she's brunette ;)
6736494 totally canon ;)
6737847 Our stories' canons are mating. Quick, get the hose.
6737866 XD
I ship Soarin'Jack anyways haha