A quick fix, just fucking, that's all that's was supposed to be. Then he had to go and ruin it all. Here I am, tangled up in his limbs begging for more, begging for everything he could give just as much as he wanted to give it to me.
Well in terms of clop it was pretty cool and it does lay out the start of the 'relationship' quite well, but she seemed to jump to 'getting a quickie' quite quickly (no pun intended) I felt it could have been expanded a bit more...
...or maybe that's just me wishing for more to read. Either could be the case, really.
Great chapter and I know what I voted for so I hope that'll be the outcome!
Now that's a start. I mean, it's more than a bit clichéd, meeting in a bar while one partner was smarting from a breakup, but it's fitting and gets the job done. Nice one.
Well in terms of clop it was pretty cool and it does lay out the start of the 'relationship' quite well, but she seemed to jump to 'getting a quickie' quite quickly (no pun intended) I felt it could have been expanded a bit more...
...or maybe that's just me wishing for more to read. Either could be the case, really.
Great chapter and I know what I voted for so I hope that'll be the outcome!
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Thanks, yeah I was having issue with drawing out her idea, but in the end nothing stuck so I went for the easiest route.
I'm hoping to start writing and get the next chapter out within the next few weeks, hooves crossed ;)
Now that's a start.
I mean, it's more than a bit clichéd, meeting in a bar while one partner was smarting from a breakup, but it's fitting and gets the job done. Nice one.
Nope. Just wanted to see if the carpet matched the drapes.