Heart of Glass

Okay, so this is Griffonstone. Yeah, I know what it looks like. Shut up. You dweebs couldn't do any better. Anyway, I'm the griffon who's gonna make it like the big deal it used to be.

Written for the Writer's Training Grounds '15 #4.

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nightwalker

nightwalker #1 · May 27th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Good stuff. Again you got the character voice down well. Guess it helps that a lot of these have been so distinctive, heh. It also acknowledges the lesson of the episode; you need something to rally around, some kind of totem, to be able to achieve things at times.

Given griffons' capitalistic nature, what better totem than a market?

Godzillawolf

Godzillawolf #2 · May 27th, 2015 · 3 · ·

This is really beautiful. I like how you pick up where the episode left off and show Gilda IS on the road to reviving her country's greatness, it's just going to be a long road.

Overall, great story.

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #3 · May 27th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Nicely done all around. Gilda may have learned a lot from Dash and Pinkie's visit, but she's still Gilda, and that quintessential Gildaness shines through here. A most enjoyable read.

Impossible Numbers

Impossible Numbers #4 · May 27th, 2015 · · ·

You've got the voice down to perfection, the roc story ties in nicely with Gilda's reasoning, and all in all I find it hard to criticize.

When the feather blows out of our paw this time, we're gonna fly after it can get it back.

I think this is a typo, though.

Lewd Yoshi

Lewd Yoshi #5 · May 27th, 2015 · · ·

Incredible, dude~

Alex Warlorn

Alex Warlorn #6 · May 27th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Good work.

Thunderhalk89

Thunderhalk89 #7 · May 28th, 2015 · 5 · ·

I was going to upvote this story, but then you linked to Blondie.
Now, I have to favorite it.

Noctus Umbra

Noctus Umbra #8 · May 29th, 2015 · 2 · ·

No made-up fantasy junk like what you probably think a library should be full of; this is the actual words of the kings, scratched on to paper by their claws. The real history, straight from their beaks.

Dang, son. Almost every historian would kill for such a library.