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One Week

Gilda wants to be friends with RD again. Last time she was in town she sort of... made every one of Dash's friends her enemy, but especially Fluttershy. She will do anything that she can to get her best friend back. Even... apologize.
It is told from the perspective of Tank, who is simply sitting in Rainbow Dash's home, and each day Gilda speaks with him about what happened, because who else is she going to tell?

Chapters (3)

Really? Okay. I'll try. · 15th Aug 2014 · 795 words
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Ugh. FINE! I'll come back TOMORROW! · 23rd Nov 2014 · 867 words
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Wait. Seriously? · 13th Dec 2014 · 837 words
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Skunkiss

Skunkiss #1 · Nov 24th, 2014 · · · Ugh. FINE! I'll come back TOMORROW! ·

Short but nice. The perspective is a little... unusual.

lets see where this is going

Rocket

Rocket #2 · Nov 25th, 2014 · · · Ugh. FINE! I'll come back TOMORROW! ·

LOL at "tube cats"! And for This week would not be in vein., I think you want "This week would not be in vain." I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of it!

Not

Not #3 · Nov 29th, 2014 · · · Ugh. FINE! I'll come back TOMORROW! ·

5309131 Thanks for the correction. Also, I have heard ferrets called that by actual people before. If you've never seen one, it's a decent enough description. If you see any other typos I'm always glad to fix them.

5307073 I should put something up tomorrow, so we'll learn a bit more about where it's going. Though it should be rather obvious from the start what the endgoal is. XD Tank exposition is fun to write. He is a very intellectual being, and he is going to accidentally spark a sort of investigation. I have plans for this tortoise.