• Member Since 23rd Sep, 2011
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FurryBrony


I have Asperger Syndrome, Erb's Palsey in my left arm, and am somewhat out of shape. I enjoy video games, watching television, roller coasters, and reading.

Comments ( 35 )

I'm loving it so far.

Keep it up.:pinkiesmile:

Darn you Im working on a fic like this too and you beat me to it lol.

6007059 Sorry about that. I didn't know. I'd love to read it.

6007067 Ive been waiting for a fic like this for ever so i hope you updae frequently

6007081 I'm not sure how far I can take this, but I'll try to update frequently until I declare it complete.

Not bad for a first chapter and someone was bound to make a fanfic on the episode of this incident.

It's about time someone made this :)

well im dissapointed..... no offense though

I've been WAITING for a story on this

6007208 is that a leg garter? Rarity you surprise me! (grrowl~!)

I've been waiting for this story. Only I was hoping it was about her and the gunk. *Wink**Wink*

Hmm...the pacing's a little off. It could've used a little more meat in between events, or probably start off with Rarity already on the run, as most of us already know how she got there. Also, "get to me dress" just threw me off.

You've got a good concept. Just needs a little polish.

6008568 Yeah, I don't notice mistakes like that until someone points them out. The spelling mistake will be fixed immediately. I'm not sure how I'll fix the pacing and all.

dude, you gotta change the name. the fanfic is alright, but i'd like it if the name and summary of the fanfic were altered. to better fit the story. this is becoming, " a nudists adventure" not, "raritys nude gala experience." even if the episode in question is the catalyst, its not the actual focus. other than that, all this needs is some polishing that others are pointing out.

Huh... this is actually pretty interesting, looking forward to more.

Shining sighed. "Come on, then. We need to get you dressed before the royal guard come. I can explain to Cadance why I'm taking so long." He cancelled the magic and helped her into the room, closing it behind her and standing guard.

I'd be more worried about explaining what you and a naked Rarity are doing in the cloakroom.

6030160 They're not. I might be able to word it better, but he's standing guard outside of the cloakroom while Rarity's inside, getting her spare dress.

6796908 I'll try. But I can't guarantee anything.

I like what I read, makes me wonder if in the next chapter she shows up to her own birthday party bare.

7145935 I honestly hadn't been able to come up with any ideas lately, but that's a good one.

7154408 Alright, glad I was able to help in some small way.

Maybe she'll start a nudist club?

Well there is another fic that runs Fluttershy as a stay home nudist, and that was nightmare night fic where Rainbow and AJ go walking around in only body paint and nothing else. It's a good read and I suggest it if you have the time.

But Tree Huger didn't give her the idea in that fic as it's equestria girls Fluttershy.

I agree with both your headcanons. I noticed some typos, and it's a little short for such a long wait, but good job!

7476384 https://www.fimfiction.net/story/318826/clothing-nightmare-on-nightmare-night
That would be this one I think you mean. Not cloppy but still fun to read.:yay:

Good job, hope to see more.

Sorry for the long absence, my laptop keyboard basically died, leaving me with just the on-screen keyboard. I just recently got a USB keyboard, so I should be able to update my stories soon. To everyone still waiting on a new chapter, your patience will be rewarded.

Weird how Rarity decided to focus on simply naturism, yet she was turned on from being naked in public and seemed to give implications of being an exhibitionist in the last chapter.

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