• Member Since 23rd Sep, 2011
  • offline last seen April 18th

FurryBrony


I have Asperger Syndrome, Erb's Palsey in my left arm, and am somewhat out of shape. I enjoy video games, watching television, roller coasters, and reading.

Comments ( 15 )

I don't even have to tell you how many things are wrong with this.

Good day.

fairly well written one-shot i must say. the idea was a little odd, but well done. :pinkiesad2:
Just one thing i want to point out

Pinkei turned, expecting to see the others struggling not to laugh

You switched the i and the e in pinkie there. :facehoof:

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Fixed. And thanks

I have to admit, this was pretty funny...

Very anticlimactic ending. Could have had a hook on it, but I digress. You're a good writer though, no big errors, so I'll like it up! :twilightsmile:

After reading the part where Pinkie first wets herself, the first thing that popped into my head was that one part in "Billy Madison"

The ending was a bit anticlimactic but other than that I enjoyed this.

Kinda cute.

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