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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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I have not read it yet... although I get on board on almost any human x pony story. Also the more crazy the pairing is, the more funny it can be.

I hope this is good.

Great start so far, my friend. I wish you luck and look forward to more. :twilightsmile:

Don't let the down thumbs get you well...down! Keep up the good work!

In the infamous words of Heath Ledger's Joker:

Phoenix X Maya fey is the only real ship.

5901200 Uh... why? Phoenix has never expressed interest in Maya in that manner, nor vice versa, despite what Pearl thinks. We've given a perfectly reasonable explanation as to why in the Turnabout Storm novelization.

5900371 She's not the most conventional ship around, but she'll sail, trust me!


5900650 Initial hate was expected, but she's still afloat. Things can only improve from here!


5901200 No, Linky x Twinkleshine is the one true ship! Well to me anyway...

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Well, this is about as unusual a ship as there is. Plenty is planned. Hope you like!

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Thanks! Appreciate the well-wishes. Plenty more is ready to go but I need to wait for Turnabout Storm epilogue to be posted before continuing so can get my full audience in. The side story, or at least the blog entry for this, is linked to at the end of it. The plan is that once that goes live, people should come here (even if it's just to downvote) and that, coupled with new chapter releases and addition to groups will hopefully give this thing a big initial boost.

I know full well that this is likely to garner plenty of downvotes for the subject matter alone. I can't help that, unfortunately. But don't worry, it won't stop me either. This story will find its audience, and I think they'll be very appreciative of it.

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You're right... just have to get over the hump of the initial hate. So far, she's treading water. And as I've released this Kraken of a ship-fic, I really should get some Kraken rum to toast its departure.

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That works! :pinkiecrazy: And also appropriate for the occasion:

Well, she seems a little needy for Pheonix, otherwise it's fine. Don't know if five weeks is enough to start her going crazy =P. Well.....it IS twilight a first love, but the words just seem a little awkward. Carry on!

Well, at least Twilight enjoyed herself.

Alos Phoenix Wright needs to love her as a pony, besides pony butts are really nice.

Should mention now, if anyone comments on this chapter: the impromptu astronomy lesson was thrown in as a way to raise the word count. Most of the chapters prior to release (aside from the prologue) were sitting at over 5000 words. This chapter was at a mere 4000. I decided a more thorough explanation of the differences between Equestria and Earth was needed.

5905984 This comment amuses and scares me at the same time. How do you know what pony butts are like?

>sees "The Lawyer and The Unicorn" in feed
>pleasebephoenixwrightpleasebephoenixwrightpleasebephoenixwrightpleasebephoenixwrightpleasebephoenixwrightpleasebephoenixwrightpleasebephoenixwrightpleasebephoenixwright
>This story is a sequel to Phoenix Wright - Turnabout Storm!
YES! YESYESYESYSEYESYSEYES , ALL HANDS ON DECK THIS SHIP HAS SAILED!....

but ugh , as much as this would interest me , it's based off the fic , not the video series , and from reading your blog about it there's other stuff you did with the fic that wasn't in the videos , so would that mean i would have to read over that 400k word fic in order to fully understand/enjoy what's happening here :l ??......

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Not a that kind pony.... not from our planet.

I was referring to a MLP FIM's pony's butt.

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You don't have to read the novelization to read this. :scootangel: It wouldn't hurt, but I can certainly understand if you don't want to run through an entire 400,000 word story.

All you have to know is that it basically followed the videos except for adding an extended ending and subplots, including a Twilight/Phoenix romance. Long story short: Twilight fell for Phoenix because (among other reasons) she'd been reading romance novels and Phoenix was an amalgam of all her favorite characters and themes; Phoenix did so in return but wasn't sure if it was real or Twilight was magically influencing him.

They talk and decide to take things slow. Phoenix doesn't go home right away after the Rainbow Dash verdict, but stays for two more trials (to defend Sonata and Trixie), Twilight accidentally summons his friends when she tries to contact them for him, various shenanigans occur, and at the very end Twilight and Phoenix kiss. There, you're caught up. :twilightsmile:

If you want just a little more background on where the attraction comes from, read the latter half of part 59 only: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/6177/60/phoenix-wright-turnabout-storm/part-59-shadows-of-the-past-lingering-memories

5906200 magical influence?....

defend trixie? from what?....

oh wow thanks , that's the fastest 400k word catch up ever lol.....

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In the novelization, there's an alternate ending in that Trixie goes a little nuts after Phoenix finally proves Sonata did it. She loses it and all her magic just explodes out of her, which includes ice and weather magic--things she's had to suppress her whole life (if you remember, she conjured a small storm cloud when she tried to deal with the Ursa Minor and when she had the Alicorn Amulet, storm clouds were all around her).

She duels Twilight right in the courtroom, and you learn her backstory in the process and why she hates Twilight, indirectly explaining the black locks. She loses the duel to Twilight, is charged with assault and several hundred counts of reckless endangerment, and Phoenix decides to defend her after Twilight shares with him what she learned of Trixie's past.

You don't have to read the whole story, but you can give this chapter a read if you like. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/6177/55/phoenix-wright-turnabout-storm/part-54-the-fire-of-friendship-memories-of-the-past

5906373 ah i see , did you know the black psych locks have a canon explanation now :l ?....

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I do indeed. And that explanation was incorporated into Trixie's. :coolphoto:

5906470 oh i see , sigh now the fanon possibilities have already been ruined or this :c ....

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Not to worry. :scootangel: Trixie herself broke the locks when she finally realized the real reason why she hated Twilight. That is in this chapter: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/6177/58/phoenix-wright-turnabout-storm/part-57-riddle-me-this-whats-black-and-blue

5906551 nooo i mean because of the canon explanation now fanon explanations that could have been interesting wont exist anymore , such as with the case here....

5906579 Hey! You're that guy from the Colarix image! Small world isn't it?

Ah, someone beat me to mentioning Pluto's demotion. (Reading it during my lunch break earlier today.) Sorry fellas its not a planet.

Oh great, now they'll BOTH think they were too forward. Phoenix thinks he took advantage of her, I think, and Twilight will likely think she did the same. Firesight, this is the opposite of a negative critique. The fuse is lit, now I'm waiting for this powder barrel to explode.

The funny thing about this ship is that we have possibly two of the most neurotic protagonists imaginable trying to justify why they're falling in love. Kids listen to Uncle Al, sometimes you have to take a chance and let yourself fall. Just because love is a bunch of chemical reactions in your brain doesn't mean it has to make a lick of sense nor does it mean its not any less beautiful. Why the heck do you think they call beautiful love "good chemistry!" Oh boy, my nerd is showing, and I have no idea where that tangent was supposed to go. :applejackconfused:

Any story that gets me rambling is a plus in my book. Keep it up!:rainbowdetermined2:

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Ah, someone beat me to mentioning Pluto's demotion. (Reading it during my lunch break earlier today.) Sorry fellas its not a planet.

I know it's not a planet, but somehow, "Kuniper Belt Object" just isn't as sexy...

Oh great, now they'll BOTH think they were too forward. Phoenix thinks he took advantage of her, I think, and Twilight will likely think she did the same. Firesight, this is the opposite of a negative critique. The fuse is lit, now I'm waiting for this powder barrel to explode.

Oh, it will explode my friend. And don't worry--I take this as a compliment, because that's exactly what I was trying to convey. :raritywink:

The funny thing about this ship is that we have possibly two of the most neurotic protagonists imaginable trying to justify why they're falling in love. Kids listen to Uncle Al, sometimes you have to take a chance and let yourself fall. Just because love is a bunch of chemical reactions in your brain doesn't mean it has to make a lick of sense nor does it mean its not any less beautiful. Why the heck do you think they call beautiful love "good chemistry!" Oh boy, my nerd is showing, and I have no idea where that tangent was supposed to go. :applejackconfused:

Yes, yes, yes, a thousand times YES! :raritystarry: :raritystarry: :raritystarry:

Any story that gets me rambling is a plus in my book. Keep it up!:rainbowdetermined2:

The downvotes sting, but don't worry--the story goes on! Thanks for the comment, and hope you liked First Contact, as it were. :rainbowwild:

5907238 You know, the derpibooru image! The one with her on the assembly line.

How do you forget something like that? Eh, whatever. I decided not to write a clopfic about it. I know you must be broke up about that...

Hey look, here's a clopfic right here. Lets read that!

Hmm. Didn't expect so see vinyl. Dragon fire candle is pretty rad.

Ohhh its finally here!!! :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:
It's already a saturday here which means i'll get to watch yet another episode of mlp very soon, but now i have another reason to celebrate! The story is finally out!!! I feel like its my birthday today!
5900371 sir if what you say is true then you are in for a great treat. It's so painful that i can't tell you about anything i've read so far (i've edited this comment a dosen times before i submitted it) *groan*... but its really really good *heavy breathing*.
I almost envy the people that don't yet know what is in store for them (i'm looking at you downvoters). Suffice to say i know this story will ruffle a few conservative feathers (specially those of the Maya x Phoenix shippers) but to that i say - The story is a gem, a blissful journey that features not only the budding relationship of two very unlikely lovers but also their struggle in facing the norm, their doubt and insecurities, the ghost of their past, and all its effect to the people they care about (Maya to be specific).
I love Maya, she and Phoenix go a long way. They are the ship. Their relationship, chemistry, and all the things they've got going for each other are all well considered in this story (kudos to that Firesight, kudos).
To me, as a heavy shipper of the two it's good to know that Maya wont take twilight's detestable ursurpation sitting down!!!

5901200 im a Maya shipper myself so i know where you're coming from.

- Been meaning to post this comment for a time now. I don't know why i can't do it with my main account but i wont talk about it here. anyways, congrats firesight

Didn't seem out of line for me, though it was a little fast. They've only known each other for like two weeks. Their after reactions were also a little odd. Anyway, looking forward to the continuation!

5912086 That's kinda the point Firesight was trying to make. They haven't known each other that long, but their passions overrode their judgement. And when they came down from their high, both of them - two of the most neurotic protagonists ever seen in fiction - thought that they had alienated the other by moving too fast.

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What Leo said. Trust me, they wouldn't be the first potential couple to jump into things too soon and be a bit weirded out after. Their reactions will be explored in the new chapter just posted.

I have to agree with ArcaneVisions, she does seem a bit needy considering its only been bout five weeks.
But other then that this is looking like a good story so far.

Nice job so far!

I was fearing this story since I saw it on the New Stories list, since usually M = clop.

And yeah, it's a clopfic.

And I usually don't read clopfics.

But I still read it. And liked it.

...what is wrong with me?

Woot!
Another well done chapter!

LOL, What Twi did there with the chicken... omg I love her now.
Ha! That was perfection... and nice job with your boobs twi, nice XD
hahaha.

nice job again!

5906080 actually that mini lesson was interesting:twilightsmile:

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Since two people have now said that, I've turned down the neediness level down a bit in the chapter proper. Thanks!

Why so many downvotes?

Nice to see my gurl Vinyl here :D
And a lesson on the solar system... Twilight's mind is blown.

Good show~

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I consider it high compliment that non-cloppers like the story! Nothing's wrong you for it... you just appreciate (what I think) is a well-written story with good character development and storyline, one where the sex serves the story as much the other way around. But regardless of why you like it, I'm very glad you do. Welcome and enjoy. :coolphoto:

Booooooooooobs.
Ha!

Nice job, and LOL... Vinyl, lvoe her reaction! 8'D

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I got a slew of downvotes on Friday's initial release, and a steady trickle since until today. :ajsleepy:

People downvoted it for the subject matter and/or ship alone without ever reading it. Human/pony is a big no-no for some folks, cross-universe character ships are for others. Mostly, I'm guessing they had a visceral and very negative reaction to seeing Twilight/Phoenix shipped and thumbed down the story on the basis of that alone. Nothing I can do about that unfortunately, except try to rack up the upvotes as well and ask folks to spread the word that this is, in fact, a good story. And releasing the Turnabout Storm epilogue was key to all that, because that's where my willing reader pool is coming from right now.

I won't let the downvotes get me down, especially with the love I'm seeing for the story today with a ton of new upvotes and faves. :pinkiegasp: Thanks for reading, and the story won't stop!

Whoooo! Caught up, and dang... Celly you sly minx, methinks you had some fun times back in the human world 8'D
CACKLES LOUDLY!

Keep it up boi!

5913022 ill put the clop asside


Like its a CROSSOVER! Plus i was actually expecting that:twilightsheepish:

5912983 Huge controversy before the story released. A vocal minority hated the shipping and thought Firesight was a war criminal for adding it. Some of the downvotes were no doubt concerted given the ways the statistics worked out. It doesn't even matter now. People are reading it and accepting it for the great story that it is, and that's all that matters!

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Welcome!
And keep up the good work dude!

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