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Firesight


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This story is a sequel to Phoenix Wright - Turnabout Storm!


Twilight Sparkle and Phoenix Wright. A human and a pony. A lawyer and a unicorn. The unlikeliest of couples, their bond was forged and tested in the trials of Turnabout Storm. The storm passed, but their feelings for each other did not, even after Phoenix went home. How far will Twilight go to see him again? Is what they feel real, or merely a magical artifact? Is it even possible for man and mare to be mates? Can they be together, or are the differences and distances between them simply too great...?


DISCLAIMER: This story makes no claim of endorsement by or affiliation with the original Turnabout Storm production, or being in any way official. It's a continuation to the unofficial novelization, not the original videos themselves.

This is a T-rated version of The Lawyer and The Unicorn (M-rated version) available through my story page. The M-rated version adds a great deal of adult content! If you wish to read it, its introductory blog is here: https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/475549/the-great-ship-sets-sail


Writer: Firesight (firesight72@hotmail.com)
Co-writer: Leo Archon
Prereaders/Editors: AJ_Aficionado, SilentwoodFire, ClaytonTheHunter, EbonHaste, James CyberLink

Chapters (21)
Comments ( 12 )

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Nice work on Firefly!

What the fuck is this and how can i destroy it

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In some ways, I agree. It’s not as interesting without the sex. But giving the people what they wanted...

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If you think Twilight’s brain stopped working now, you’ve seen what happened later with Celestia! :pinkiegasp:

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Thanks! You’ll see more of her shortly.

geese where was notifications i dident even know you posted this?

Comment posted by Firesight deleted Last Friday

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Apologies. But it’s up now, and I’m attempting to release new chapters at the rate of one per day.

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OW I absent blaming you i was more blaming the site because I Dident get any notification or maby it Dident tell me I don’t know but yeah sorry about the mix up.

She grinned. “And when did the two of them start mating? Before or after her aura changed color?”

It was, both Phoenix and Mia realized, a good question. If Shadowmoon answered the latter, Nightmare would claim that Luna did, in fact, magically manipulate the two into mating.

But to the relief of both, Shadowmoon simply smiled. “Before.

already said that didn’t appear until after the pair had started!” he repeated, annoyed.

Continuity error

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[reads and rereads the passages several times in context to make sure]. There’s no error. Consider:

  1. In response to the first question, he said they started having sex before her mating aura was seen.
  2. He then asserted in response to a second question that her mating aura appeared after they had already started having sex.

Those two statements are, I believe, congruent?

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