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This story is a sequel to Phoenix Wright - Turnabout Storm!


Twilight Sparkle and Phoenix Wright. A human and a pony. A lawyer and a unicorn. The unlikeliest of couples, their bond was forged and tested in the trials of Turnabout Storm. The storm passed, but their feelings for each other did not, even after Phoenix went home. How far will Twilight go to see him again? Is what they feel real, or merely a magical artifact? Is it even possible for man and mare to be mates? Can they be together, or are the differences and distances between them simply too great...?


DISCLAIMER: This story makes no claim of endorsement by or affiliation with the original Turnabout Storm production, or being in any way official. It's a continuation to the unofficial novelization, not the original videos themselves.

This is a T-rated version of The Lawyer and The Unicorn (M-rated version) available through my story page. The M-rated version adds a great deal of adult content! If you wish to read it, its introductory blog is here: https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/475549/the-great-ship-sets-sail


Writer: Firesight (firesight72@hotmail.com)
Co-writer: Leo Archon
Prereaders/Editors: AJ_Aficionado, SilentwoodFire, ClaytonTheHunter, EbonHaste, James CyberLink

Chapters (35)
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Comments ( 71 )

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Nice work on Firefly!

What the fuck is this and how can i destroy it

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In some ways, I agree. It’s not as interesting without the sex. But giving the people what they wanted...

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If you think Twilight’s brain stopped working now, you’ve seen what happened later with Celestia! :pinkiegasp:

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Thanks! You’ll see more of her shortly.

geese where was notifications i dident even know you posted this?

Comment posted by Firesight deleted May 25th

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Apologies. But it’s up now, and I’m attempting to release new chapters at the rate of one per day.

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OW I absent blaming you i was more blaming the site because I Dident get any notification or maby it Dident tell me I don’t know but yeah sorry about the mix up.

She grinned. “And when did the two of them start mating? Before or after her aura changed color?”

It was, both Phoenix and Mia realized, a good question. If Shadowmoon answered the latter, Nightmare would claim that Luna did, in fact, magically manipulate the two into mating.

But to the relief of both, Shadowmoon simply smiled. “Before.

already said that didn’t appear until after the pair had started!” he repeated, annoyed.

Continuity error

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[reads and rereads the passages several times in context to make sure]. There’s no error. Consider:

  1. In response to the first question, he said they started having sex before her mating aura was seen.
  2. He then asserted in response to a second question that her mating aura appeared after they had already started having sex.

Those two statements are, I believe, congruent?

:raritystarry:dis gunna be AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!:raritystarry:

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I have one OBJECTION! to how the trial played out... At first it was going to be 12 chapters, but it turned out to be 11... why?

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Ah. the reason is that the 12th chapter was a heavily adult chapter that took place between The Heart's Turnabout - Parts 5 and 6. It was a flashback chapter that showed exactly what took place the night of the party in Equestria that nobody could remember afterwards. Nobody except for Rarity, that was, as it was shown through her eyes using Luna's powers to bring memories to life in dreams. I started to edit it at some point but then realized that there wouldn't be much left of it afterwards. So I cut it completely and modified the following chapter to explain what it showed.

If you want, I'll try to turn it T-rated, but there wouldn't be much more than a couple thousand words of it left after.

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Oh, ok. I was just curious about this discrepancy. Don't feel like you have to do that for me.:pinkiehappy:

I think you just did…”

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*deep breath* SEQUAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please?

Huge thanks for making a T-rated version! I usually have the filter on since I don't really care for most M-rated stories, but I'm super glad I found this one in the popular stories box! This was an amazing read, one that kept me awake at night when I just couldn't stop reading.

Thanks for the ride!

I think that if you make a sequel it should be about Phoenix and Twilight’s kids. I don’t know if you take suggestions but it would be cool if in the sequel Discord goes to the past to ruin Phoenix’s future so his kids go back in time to prevent Discord from messing with the past. I don’t know if it would be something that you would like to do but I would totally read it if you do. I would understand if you don’t want to. Just a thought.

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Sounds like we have a winner!

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*deep breath*SEQUAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!please?

Sequels are planned! :pinkiehappy: But if you want more verse-related stuff in the meantime, check out my Firefly stories if you haven't already.

TBefore the Storm: The Rise of Firefly
Before the Wonderbolts, there were the Bolt Knights. And before Rainbow Dash, there was Firefly. The story of Rainbow Dash's ancestor, the origin of the Wonderbolts, and the coming of the Gryphon War.
Firesight · 259k words  ·  265  16 · 2.7k views
TInto the Storm: The Flight of Firefly
Before the Wonderbolts, there were the Bolt Knights. And before Rainbow Dash, there was Firefly. The story of Rainbow Dash's ancestor, the founding of the Wonderbolts, and the outbreak of the Great Pony/Gryphon War.
Firesight · 72k words  ·  92  4 · 681 views

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You're very welcome! Future sequels will probably involve one M-rated story instead of separate ones but they'll have separate T-rated and M-rated chapters where applicable.

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It's an interesting idea to be sure, but we do already have most of the future of this verse sketched out, and the question of children will be addressed eventually. As for Discord, you'll certainly hear from him over time. It's even possible he'll decide to come and check out earth himself at some point. Heaven help us even if he's reformed... :unsuresweetie:

Thanks for reading, everyone!

Just a quick question when will the sequel come out? I’m not trying to be rude or anything.

Maya sighed again. “My mother will be officially labeled as ‘deceased’ come February. On that day, I will officially be instated as the Master of the Kurain Channeling Technique.”

WHY IS IT ALWAYS FEBRUARY?!

For the first time that night, Celestia gave her patented coy grin. “Well, my student… as worked up as you just left me, I sincerely doubt we’ll be sleeping much!” she noted, winking and teleporting out in a flash of gold light.

Bow chicka bow wow.
GOD DAMN YOU, TUCKER!

“FOREVERRRRRR!” Pinkie Pie’s voice sounded before the connection cut. They gaped at each other for a moment… then burst out laughing, their tension ended.

OUTTA THIS HOUSE! OUTTA THIS HOUSE! SPIRITS BEGONE FROM THIS HOUSE.

“Well… if Gandalf had command of those giant eagles, then… why didn’t they just use them to deliver the ring to Mordor…? ”

PLOT CONVENIENCE, OF COURSE.

“And what did you think I would be?” Celestia asked, almost rhetorically. “That I would be a power-crazed tyrant? Maybe a mare gone mad from such a long life? A dour and humorless demigod? Or perhaps a pony who, with an endless number of tomorrows, simply fills her days with debauchery and engages in all forms of excess?” she suggested, her grin growing bigger with each suggested version of herself.

LET'S COUNT THE ALTERNATES!
1. TCB Celestia.
2. Any. Controlling. Sunbutt.
3. The polar opposite of Trollestia
4. PRINCESS MOLESTIA?! Hello, my little human... OH GOD, SHE'S FOUND ME! AAAAAAHHH!

“Actually, I kinda want to hear!” Red Phoenix was rubbing his chin and grinning.

GO AWAY, FAUXNIX WRONG!

But the doppelganger failed to take the hint. “Yes, there are! I’m not done yet!” he pointed a finger again. “I still want to know if—” abruptly, his voice was stopped and his hands went to his throat like he was being choked.

YOU DON'T KNOW THE POWER OF THE DARK SIDE.

“Very well then… Princess. This court accepts your statement as corroborating testimony.” Trixie still sounded flustered as she marked her ruling with another gavel rap, wondering who else would yet visit the trial before all was said and done. The Princesses are here, The Nightmare is here, Snarkle and Wrong are here… by the winter winds, who else is LEFT?

Me. Also Freddy.
ARE YOU READY, FOR FREDDY?

“One chance is all I need, Your Honor,” Phoenix said with a nod. It’s all coming to an end… and for what she’s put both Twilight and me through, I swear I’ll strike the finishing blow MYSELF!

Time for Phoenix Wright to do what he does best.

“Not at all. I’m a solar-powered princess. Sunlight is what defines me,” she winked, clicking the lid closed and tossing the bottle to Maya. “But kindly do pass this to Ferro when you’re done so he can put more on Cyprey and Pearly as well. They’ve already been out for over an hour in the sun at the pool, after all.”

In other words...
:trollestia: I have magic, and the sun, mother fucker. I AM THE SUNBURN

Celestia smiled again, if somewhat more slyly. “Fear not, my easily distracted student. I have Ferro attending to that even as we speak,” she told them in a coy tone, Vinyl quickly explaining to Pinkie Pie who ‘Ferro’ was, causing Phoenix to suddenly and belatedly worry about how he would take the events of the previous night. “He is checking me out of the Gatewater and should be arriving shortly, bringing young Pearl with him. I have given him my credit card and instructed him to purchase what I hope are appropriate—and Equestria-safe—gifts for each of you.”

I am going to be honest, when I read this paragraph, I was feelings of the emotions I normally feel when I check out of a hotel. Nice job on that, even if unintentional.

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Because it’s Groundhog Day and you have to endlessly relive it!

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I don’t think there’s any way to exorcise Pinkie Pie!

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You should see the debate that erupted in the M-rated version of the chapter over this!

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She has literally been all of those at one point or another in this verse! And in the M-rated version, the last emerges again for a time... :pinkiegasp:

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Don’t worry, many more will follow!

He was there to be hated. And judging by the comments on the M-rated version, he was!

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Trixie should really know better than to ask questions like that!

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It wouldn’t be an Ace Attorney trial unless he did! :rainbowdetermined2:

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