Little Star
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YaY x2
That's what you got from Canterlot's contractor. They have Canterlot residents' ego. You need to hire from some other town like Manhattan or Fillydelphia.
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YAY⁴
Glad to see a new chapter and it was entertaining
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admitedly the ending was change as a result of my moms death
Just finished rereading the story and catching up on the new chapter really liking it so far hope to see more soon
Average story has a interesting plot line but i’ve noticed an error after Luna and twilight beat the dragon now the way you could fixed it is have the Second version be seen from a different angle like maybe some pony from the order of the son spying on them or have someone be watching them through magical meetings that’s just my suggestion where are you want to do you go ahead and do it
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what error?
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At the end of the second to last chapter
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And what is the error?
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this error.
“You had me so worried mother when he breathed fire on you.”
“Thankfully my faith in my sister's detail work was well founded, this armor is as good if not better than my old set. Sorry to worry you daughter, but even with out this armor I would survive that, it would just be painful.”
“Okay…..” I took a calming breath. “So what did you do with the hoard?”
“Ponyville now has a surplus of funds since they were the town most affected. Now, let us head home and report our victory!” Mother raised a hoof in the air and couldn't help but smile, mother could be entertaining at times.
“You had me so worried mother when he breathed fire on you.”
“Thankfully my faith in my sister's detail work was well founded, this armor is as good if not better than my old set. Sorry to worry you daughter, but even with out this armor I would survive that, it would just be painful.”
“Okay…..” I took a calming breath. “So what did you do with the hoard?”
“Ponyville now has a surplus of funds since they were the town most affected. Now, let us head home and report our victory!” Mother raised a hoof in the air and couldn't help but smile, mother could be entertaining at times.