Well that escalated quickly.

well it was a thousand years in the making

5826131 Still, maybe a tad bit TOO quickly.

5826730 it's a short burst, further chapters will explain it. Trust me Twilight's actions are very justified

5826741 You don't like Celestia, do you?

5827411 actually I do, not as much as Luna but I do.

Canon Celestia is well intentioned but makes critcal errors. The same here. What she did in this story was not for evil purposes at all. She felt like she had no choice but to do what she did.

5828136 That "THIS IS FOR YOUR OWN GOOD!" argument again?

5828165 No just limited time and couldn't think of anything else.

She isn't Solar Flare here at all. She was desperate and made poor choices, and many suffered for it.

5828232 Makes sense!

5828373 as the story progresses more will be reveal to the reasons on all sides. But for Celestia herself, she's akin to the Past Sins version.

Is this a story where Luna is Twilights Mother.

So love this can not wait for more

5828404 Cool!

i love this story

Quite sudden take, would have liked a bit more build up for the reader, but it is very enjoyable.

Jesus Christ, you couldn't have made Twilight more OOC and edgy if you tried. This crap reads like bad Harry Potter fanfiction from 2005.

It was a tired, but happy, Twilight that walked into her new home.

This sentence is, so absurdly strange, but god do I love it!

... What the fuck?...

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What the fuck dude, it's a first chapter and you already dropping stuff like that in the comments. I don't even know what names you using.