"why did I watch you, why did I watch you?" the question swirled around my head as I inspected your other stories and then I found it even though it has yet to be touched again I am glad your back while this is not my favorite story of yours It still intrigues me greatly.
(1) Saw update notice. (2) Tried to think which story it is. (3) Clicked link (4) WEEEEEE!!!
“I never liked her. Wrong colors to be the goddess faithful student. Sunset Shimmer was far more suitable student. A shame she disappeared .” The unicorn mare said.
Never thought there is a color requirement to be a faithful student. So they think the one who want to overthrown Celestia is a better 'faithful' student? I think these ponies need their vocabulary adjustment.
9584826 I mean their view of a 'faithful' student is based on the pony's color is pretty silly. Because being faithful has nothing to do with the coat color. Otherwise, by their own words, any bureaucrat ponies with dark color can be consider 'unfaithful' to Celestia?
Ah, the obliviousness of the zealot. In the same breath as worshipping Celestia as a goddess, to claim that it's the night ponies that are the superstitious ones.
10209948 yup. Hell they are slightly based off another group where despite Celestia herself telling them they are wrong they still went after Luna. The issue is power. they see power in this and use it.
when everything is good there will always be dissatisfied, there will always be a split, there will always be confrontation. Only in the face of a global threat do creatures unite.
10311201 Yahoo! Now where is the Yahoo! search button? Oh there it is! Pinkie! come backwith that search button! How dose she not get tired of running?
Ok, if I could travel to Equestria I would travel to that cult meeting, slug at least one of them in the jaw, and say something along the lines of, “For goodness sakes!! Don’t you see you’re creating more corruption and chaos than Luna ever would!!! It feels like you’re even more dumb than Celestia!!”
I really hate when cultist are involved. They are such a lazy enemy: They are crazy, so there is no need for motivation. They are multiple, so there is no worry of them dying. They are hidden, so any stupid backstabbing can be explained. They are a mindset, so they never can be fully destroyed and can be constantly reused. They the easiest bad guys too write. Of course, a shitty version, I mean. Because if you really care, you would have a leader, that organisation depends on, a motivations, a concrete plans, instead of "we will strike soon", and even foreshadowing and clues to their personalities instead of just throwing them into the face of a reader. One can dream...
Some grammar issues but still great.
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note unedited
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I know.
*reads last part of chapter and facepalms* Hindsight might be 20/20, but stupidity is universal.
Also it's alive, IT'S ALIVE, IT'S ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!
That ending
"why did I watch you, why did I watch you?" the question swirled around my head as I inspected your other stories and then I found it even though it has yet to be touched again I am glad your back while this is not my favorite story of yours It still intrigues me greatly.
it's great to see an update! :D
(1) Saw update notice.
(2) Tried to think which story it is.
(3) Clicked link
(4) WEEEEEE!!!
Never thought there is a color requirement to be a faithful student. So they think the one who want to overthrown Celestia is a better 'faithful' student? I think these ponies need their vocabulary adjustment.
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Sunset is clear sun coloered white Twilight is night theme and theseguys are Celedtia worshipers. Their preference is clear
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I mean their view of a 'faithful' student is based on the pony's color is pretty silly. Because being faithful has nothing to do with the coat color. Otherwise, by their own words, any bureaucrat ponies with dark color can be consider 'unfaithful' to Celestia?
I'm not gonna lie, I forgot all about this story & the plot, but this an excellent chapter & worth the wait!
Yay, it's alive!
Also, darn cult's... Welp, time to get our inquisitions on the move
Always odd to think that someone is a god and then assume they need help.
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They want eternal day to they are a bit crazy
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They respect Luna's power and consider it a threat.
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Yes but I question why they think they would be capable of doing anything to her of note. I’d compare it to throwing a brick at a mountain.
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Never said they her smart.
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Touché.
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Ah
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That's why Twilight's and Celestia's relationship is not in a good place.
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That explains a lot
Nice to see this story make a return. Looking forward to more.
Great to see that you are still writing, way too many have just vanished.
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Had to pause do to health reasons
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Been on permanent vacation since 1999, totaled back and broken neck.
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There will be more. Not as fast as others
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thankyou for responding, I just read the story and I really enjoyed it I hope everything is going ok over there. I hope you have a good day.
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Which Ordo would be suitable for this?
Ah, the obliviousness of the zealot. In the same breath as worshipping Celestia as a goddess, to claim that it's the night ponies that are the superstitious ones.
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yup. Hell they are slightly based off another group where despite Celestia herself telling them they are wrong they still went after Luna. The issue is power. they see power in this and use it.
when everything is good there will always be dissatisfied, there will always be a split, there will always be confrontation. Only in the face of a global threat do creatures unite.
More?
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there will be
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Yahoo! Now where is the Yahoo! search button? Oh there it is! Pinkie! come backwith that search button! How dose she not get tired of running?
Ok, if I could travel to Equestria I would travel to that cult meeting, slug at least one of them in the jaw, and say something along the lines of, “For goodness sakes!! Don’t you see you’re creating more corruption and chaos than Luna ever would!!! It feels like you’re even more dumb than Celestia!!”
I really hate when cultist are involved.
They are such a lazy enemy:
They are crazy, so there is no need for motivation.
They are multiple, so there is no worry of them dying.
They are hidden, so any stupid backstabbing can be explained.
They are a mindset, so they never can be fully destroyed and can be constantly reused.
They the easiest bad guys too write.
Of course, a shitty version, I mean. Because if you really care, you would have a leader, that organisation depends on, a motivations, a concrete plans, instead of "we will strike soon", and even foreshadowing and clues to their personalities instead of just throwing them into the face of a reader.
One can dream...