6161647 6161675 love the theme song, it fits nicely. I'm starting over so I can remember what happened and I'm reading the comments this time as well...
This chapter was way too long, and I lost count to number of problems I wanted to question you on. This is ridiculous. But most of all, I have a single main question: "If Luna was never corrupted and attacked out of revenge, what the fuck did the elements done to her then to make her friendly and feel guilty for what she had done?" And her original monologue didn't match this story at all. It sounds ridiculous.
This is all so over the top... what was I thinking when I first read it...
She wordlessly lowered the moon and brought back the day, as she nuzzled the orb. “I am so sorry, my niece. My foolishness lead to this. I swear to you, you will be reunited with your mother, and when we are reunited, we will be a family. I am SO SORRY!” With that, she wailed and cried at the injustice brought upon her family.
They will be a family. You have much to do beforehand but you probably won't. My hazy memories recall Twilight having split personality.
will twilight been okay?
6161510 She has alot to deal with. This will be a LONG road for her
6161528 will twilight friends help her though?
6161561 oh yes. and her mother. Celestia will want to but what she has done has broken the trust.
6161580 okay and can you change a theme song for Twilight star, I'm don't like the last one.
6161627 Nope it shows what she is. Remember Luna was in Nightmare form when she was concevied
6161637 but that theme song you have is bits creeps.
6161647 that's the point.
Love this
Bruh. My feels. I think they imploded and turned into a neutron star. And then collided with another one and turned into a black hole.
6177130 then this chapter met it's goal.
so are you going to put chapter 5 now yet?
6325209 Being worked on.
6325287 ok when will it been really?
6325289 not sure. a couple days or so.
6325306 ok let me know when you are really.
So far I'm rather enjoying this story.
6326022 Thanks
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6161675 love the theme song, it fits nicely. I'm starting over so I can remember what happened and I'm reading the comments this time as well...
Dayum, Tia, that's messed up.
7027947 which part?
Twilight Armor sounds like a male name huh maybe the r63 community got it wrong with dusk shine.
So much pain... and yet a slight feeling of justification.
Good in-depth chapter.
It's not Genocide it's XENOCIDE.
Also I would've made the execution of the traitors a bit longer than a few seconds.
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Everything after the defeat of discord including Sombra
This chapter was way too long, and I lost count to number of problems I wanted to question you on.
This is ridiculous.
But most of all, I have a single main question:
"If Luna was never corrupted and attacked out of revenge, what the fuck did the elements done to her then to make her friendly and feel guilty for what she had done?"
And her original monologue didn't match this story at all. It sounds ridiculous.
This is all so over the top... what was I thinking when I first read it...
They will be a family. You have much to do beforehand but you probably won't. My hazy memories recall Twilight having split personality.
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she does thanks to Celestia's meddling