6977921 Maybe just focus on one or two stories, and then move on to another couple when the first are done? Having so many stories at once seems like it was just cause infrequent updates and an overworked Admiral Q Ponyform.
7028000 She was desperate and she knows it. She was afraid that Twilight would start hurdling stars down again and she wouldn't be able to stop it. She does trust the Armor Sparkle Clan so her niece was safe.
To be honest I don't blame celetia for doing what she did. But I don't like how twighlight is so mad at her. I would understand her being sad. But i fill its to over the top. I hope you are able to update soon
7063493 Celestia created a whole new personality and Twilight Star was stuck in a body she couldn't do anything with. Celestia did the wrong thing for the right reasons. Thus their is a rift between her and both Twilight's.
As for update it will be a while. by request of my fans I am focusing other other stories for the moment. But don't worry i do have alot of this story already planned out just need to write it.
7063615 I just meant she still was taught that princess celestia was good and she looked up to her. So i just feel that she should have some more conflicting emotions than just pure anger at her
7063700 I do understand that its just she only seems to have anger to her at least right now when i feel like she should also have more emotions than just that. Sense she looked up to celestia. But that is just my opinion
7063709 Right now she is trying to adjust to the fact she now has another her in her head and that she was a creation. Right now her focus is on what her 'family' thinks of her.
7091215 her big mistake was making Sparkle. They rest can be justified but Sparkle was not. That was her panicking. It is also the main sore point between her, Luna, Star/Sparkle.
7091249 It was a panicked decision but i still wouldnt call it a bad one. Again given how star reacted to celestia right out the gate i would say star was going for kill first question later. Celestia's other option may have been (given magical copout) complete memory wipe which would ultimately kill star all together may or may not gain memories back later which would lead to further missunderstandings. Option 2 mau have been complete seal of twilights magic and imprisonment until if ever she is able to convince star to help her in her cause.
So again while not an ideal decision i cant say it was a bad one. Dont get me wrong star and luna being completely pissed at celestia is both reasonable and rightly deserved. Im just saying given alternatives she made the best choices when things went to tartarous. Now her past mistakes of putting her subjects before her family cant be changed she deserves every back lash she gets.
Just a little putting myself in her shoes so to speak.
7094015 But Star did not attack Celestia when the Seal failed. She didn't do anything at all and Ceelstia made Twilight over her. So Star had to wwatch a fake live her life and she was helpless to do anything. So when she manage to attack Celestia she had every justification to do so.
7094378 im gona have to go back and reread that chapter then.
But again im not saying they dont have full reason to be angry hell anyone else would still find it all justification to kill her if she didnt overwright her personality. I was just saying that given, the circumstances it was still a good decision. You best believe had i been in luna's or star's podition id demand retribution.
Like i said tragic but there wasnt much choice when the dice was cast. Luna made her choice when she attacked celestia. Celestia made her choice when she used the elements and star threw her dice when she attackd retribution. Celestia just happened to roll a six.
As far as sparkle goes i still stand by celestia's decision because she could drop stars (im thinking metorites) on people when she was hell bent on revenge incapacitated at the time or not if star had retalliated in anyway with no possitive buffer ie friends or family the result could have catastrophic. And like i stated there were other options but none ideal and just as tragic. Im not saying any leway should be given. The ponies who instigated the event set into motion attack and retaliation. Once they made their move the events were going to happen in one fashion or another.
7094649 agree, the princess owe both her sister and nieces major, like build them a lovey castle and let them rule over section of the country major.....that or she has to figure out how to make a clone of twilight for each mind to control......
7231910 that good, be funny when they start date and going out with two different ponys, I can so see star fall sleep next to her date and have sparkle wake up confused and scared that she in bed with someone who not her cursh.....
“So my Little Light, you said you had some news about you and Princess Luna here?”
“What, that you have fallen in love with each other?” Her mom asked.
10 out of 10 for that sentence. Love this story can't wait for more keep up the great work
6977878 what abut Luna's reaction?
yea update, also me think cadance and shinny be ok, other wont be, or they going to be angry
I was beginning to think this was abandoned. Glad to see that I was wrong.
6977914 working on A LOT of stories and I try to be fair to them all. Heck I have several more that I have yet to write.
Thank you for updating.
6977900 All of it. It was a great line. Love your work can't wait for the next chapter
6977921 Maybe just focus on one or two stories, and then move on to another couple when the first are done? Having so many stories at once seems like it was just cause infrequent updates and an overworked Admiral Q Ponyform.
damn i had hope for cadence to faint
6990458 no it hasn't. that's coming up
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When she decided to mind rape her niece and a group of loyal nobles (the Armor/Sparkles).
7028000 She was desperate and she knows it. She was afraid that Twilight would start hurdling stars down again and she wouldn't be able to stop it. She does trust the Armor Sparkle Clan so her niece was safe.
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I understand why she did it, but that doesn't change the fact that it's messed up.
7028081 true but she will find ways to make up for it.
To be honest I don't blame celetia for doing what she did. But I don't like how twighlight is so mad at her. I would understand her being sad. But i fill its to over the top. I hope you are able to update soon
7063493 Celestia created a whole new personality and Twilight Star was stuck in a body she couldn't do anything with. Celestia did the wrong thing for the right reasons. Thus their is a rift between her and both Twilight's.
As for update it will be a while. by request of my fans I am focusing other other stories for the moment. But don't worry i do have alot of this story already planned out just need to write it.
7063615 I just meant she still was taught that princess celestia was good and she looked up to her. So i just feel that she should have some more conflicting emotions than just pure anger at her
7063655 Twilight Sparkle feels betrayal with Celestia and Twilight Star down right hates her.
7063661 The way the story betray's regular twighlight makes her see like she just has nothing but pure hatred for her
7063679 She's cold to Celestia and right now needs space from her ex mentor. Remember it turn out her whole life was a lie.
7063700 I do understand that its just she only seems to have anger to her at least right now when i feel like she should also have more emotions than just that. Sense she looked up to celestia. But that is just my opinion
7063709 Right now she is trying to adjust to the fact she now has another her in her head and that she was a creation. Right now her focus is on what her 'family' thinks of her.
7063739 Ah I got the she is adjusting to the family. But didn't get the other part not trying to be rude or anything. But yeah i do like the story
I just read this story today and like it so far and hope to read more soon
7073560 I do have plans for this but do to requests by my readers I'm focusing on other stories.
7073752 oh okay thank you for letting me know
7091215 her big mistake was making Sparkle. They rest can be justified but Sparkle was not. That was her panicking. It is also the main sore point between her, Luna, Star/Sparkle.
I take star is the common sense of the two of them.
7091305 to an extent yes. But she also has issues herself. Also look who esseitanlly raised either of them./ Star Luna, Sparkle Celestia.
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It was a panicked decision but i still wouldnt call it a bad one. Again given how star reacted to celestia right out the gate i would say star was going for kill first question later. Celestia's other option may have been (given magical copout) complete memory wipe which would ultimately kill star all together may or may not gain memories back later which would lead to further missunderstandings. Option 2 mau have been complete seal of twilights magic and imprisonment until if ever she is able to convince star to help her in her cause.
So again while not an ideal decision i cant say it was a bad one. Dont get me wrong star and luna being completely pissed at celestia is both reasonable and rightly deserved. Im just saying given alternatives she made the best choices when things went to tartarous. Now her past mistakes of putting her subjects before her family cant be changed she deserves every back lash she gets.
Just a little putting myself in her shoes so to speak.
7094015 But Star did not attack Celestia when the Seal failed. She didn't do anything at all and Ceelstia made Twilight over her. So Star had to wwatch a fake live her life and she was helpless to do anything. So when she manage to attack Celestia she had every justification to do so.
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im gona have to go back and reread that chapter then.
But again im not saying they dont have full reason to be angry hell anyone else would still find it all justification to kill her if she didnt overwright her personality. I was just saying that given, the circumstances it was still a good decision. You best believe had i been in luna's or star's podition id demand retribution.
Like i said tragic but there wasnt much choice when the dice was cast. Luna made her choice when she attacked celestia. Celestia made her choice when she used the elements and star threw her dice when she attackd retribution. Celestia just happened to roll a six.
As far as sparkle goes i still stand by celestia's decision because she could drop stars (im thinking metorites) on people when she was hell bent on revenge incapacitated at the time or not if star had retalliated in anyway with no possitive buffer ie friends or family the result could have catastrophic.
And like i stated there were other options but none ideal and just as tragic. Im not saying any leway should be given. The ponies who instigated the event set into motion attack and retaliation. Once they made their move the events were going to happen in one fashion or another.
7094557 Well I can say that Celestia will do something to make amends for both versions of her Niece.
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Dont make it too easy for her after all fates a bitch and her x is murphy.
7094649 agree, the princess owe both her sister and nieces major, like build them a lovey castle and let them rule over section of the country major.....that or she has to figure out how to make a clone of twilight for each mind to control......
I want next chapter so I can knew twilight family's reaction.....
7162808 Oh the reaction will be funny.
Also some events will allow Celestia to start to make up for her mistakes.
And I have plans for the Twilights
7163695 yea yea yea, cant wait to read it
7162640 you mean the lake that pinkie pie used clon herself in that one episode?
7230759 that or a live golem to put one of the souls and minds into
7230961 I don't think a golem would work because one I don't think eather one of them would be into being in a golem. And two well just read this
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7230961 the Golem idea is not going to happen . I already hqve something in might for the Twilight's.
7231101 okay good to know thanks for letting us know
7231101 thank you for letting us knew. now we just have the pain of wait for next chapter
7230995 I have read it it where I got my idea from,
7231858 that issue won't be resoived for awhile.
7231910 that good, be funny when they start date and going out with two different ponys, I can so see star fall sleep next to her date and have sparkle wake up confused and scared that she in bed with someone who not her cursh.....
good story cant wait for more
7231987 they won't have time for that. Equestria has to get use to them again and forces of the past will make a return.
7231999 true, but make you wonder who they be ship with lol,
7232006 Sparkle: Flash Sentry? Star: maybe a bat pony or maybe Dash. not sure yet.