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Wonderful story
And so they lived happily everafter...
Sweetie Belle says "Big Brother" Way. Too. Goddamn. MUCH!!!!
Neat
stayclassy
a good story and well worth the read good job.
Harts Fire
Well I have to say, this was worth the long wait, a fantastic sequel!
A sequel that was VERY much worth the wait.
6241055 thank you
6241392 that they did
6241564 I just realized that it is like. But Anon is used some much I wanted to try and avoid using it at all.
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Thanks for the read
Love it, please keep making stories like those, I love good Rarity x Human stories
27 dears
and 48 darlings
my god...
6248469 you actually counted. And Darling is 'your' name for this. I could've used anon, but opted to do something else.
I loved the first one and this is is really good to! Keep up with the great work!
Um. So Rarity's disease makes her super-sensitive and lustful and then nothing comes of that. Why introduce that tidbit if it's not a fleshed-out plot point? Would our protagonist have done the deed if Rarity had a normal sickness? If so, that's kinda insensitive of him; if not, then he wouldn't have made things worse anyway. You dropped the gun there, Chekhov! Otherwise, this fic was decent enough.
awesome chapter are you gonna make another chapter like bonus chapter like Brony_headbanger did with one of his stories with Sunset Shimmer
6354151 I'm planning to
Cool
Darlings... So Many Darlings....
It's a great fic when it's about those two confessing to each other and the Main character's life has gotten better. Good job.
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You should've just give him an actual name, something generic like Bob or something.
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Thanks so much
A great sequel to a great story, I want more of zis beautiful storyline, also, that comment about brony headbanger I noticed earlier, I know the dude outside of fimfiction
Nice story for the most part, but there's grammar errors you may want to edit.
That should be, "Rarity's".
Add a comma "right".
That should be, "eyes".
"your".
"were".
I think that should be, "that right then and there, she needed you."
"your" and "that".
"your"
And "too".
6724412 thanks for that. I'll fix them asap
And just like the first, this gets a fav.
I would like to see a sequel about there wedding, honeymoon and married life with a trip to Zecora's cottage where they receive a potion that will allow them to have a child together.
so good, holy shit.
Would love a sequel to life with rarity
That pun was not worthy of a facehoof. It's worthy of this:
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I just read this, and then Rarity said "Future husband"...
I only have one request, good sir.
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I already loved the first story, but this one is even better!! :) Have a like on both of them.
P.S: I hope that we maybe see also a sequel of this story?
I Like this Sequel very hot e romance. Nice Work.
there was a point that I thought Rarity had said that she was pregnant (and it would be a nice twist to think)
see you
I love this one! You need a proof reader tho (if you have one he's not doing his job)
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I was thinking the same thing, a wedding fic, etc
Couldn't they scan the other leg to compare them and get a more accurate time scale for healing?
This is really good, I wonder why I never found it sooner.