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And so they lived happily everafter...

:heart:

Sweetie Belle says "Big Brother" Way. Too. Goddamn. MUCH!!!!

Neat



stayclassy:moustache:

a good story and well worth the read good job.
Harts Fire

Well I have to say, this was worth the long wait, a fantastic sequel! :raritystarry:

A sequel that was VERY much worth the wait. :raritywink:

6241055 thank you:derpytongue2:

6241392 that they did :raritywink:

6241564 :facehoof: I just realized that it is like. But Anon is used some much I wanted to try and avoid using it at all.:twilightsheepish:

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Thanks for the read:pinkiehappy:

Love it, please keep making stories like those, I love good Rarity x Human stories

27 dears
and 48 darlings

my god...

6248469 :rainbowlaugh: you actually counted. And Darling is 'your' name for this. I could've used anon, but opted to do something else.

I loved the first one and this is is really good to! Keep up with the great work!

Um. So Rarity's disease makes her super-sensitive and lustful and then nothing comes of that. Why introduce that tidbit if it's not a fleshed-out plot point? Would our protagonist have done the deed if Rarity had a normal sickness? If so, that's kinda insensitive of him; if not, then he wouldn't have made things worse anyway. You dropped the gun there, Chekhov! Otherwise, this fic was decent enough.

awesome chapter are you gonna make another chapter like bonus chapter like Brony_headbanger did with one of his stories with Sunset Shimmer

Darlings... So Many Darlings....

It's a great fic when it's about those two confessing to each other and the Main character's life has gotten better. Good job.

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You should've just give him an actual name, something generic like Bob or something.

A great sequel to a great story, I want more of zis beautiful storyline, also, that comment about brony headbanger I noticed earlier, I know the dude outside of fimfiction

Nice story for the most part, but there's grammar errors you may want to edit.

(with the exception of Rarity friends, her little sister and her friends).

That should be, "Rarity's".

“She’s right Big Brother...”

Add a comma "right".

After a few moments, you both broke away from the kiss to gaze into each other’s eye.

That should be, "eyes".

As you headed to your room with another breakfast in bed, you had careful hidden you engagement gift on her plate.

"your".

As your mare looked at you in confusion, you then revealed the hidden gift. You saw her put her hooves over her mouth as she saw what you wear holding.

"were".

that right then there she needed you.

I think that should be, "that right then and there, she needed you."

After your last shot, you looked down at you mare to see the she lost in ecstasy.

"your" and "that".

As she fell back on to you, you then felt you member kiss womb.

"your"

“I’m cumming to,” you moaned.

And "too".

6724412 thanks for that. I'll fix them asap :twilightsheepish:

And just like the first, this gets a fav.:pinkiesmile:

I would like to see a sequel about there wedding, honeymoon and married life with a trip to Zecora's cottage where they receive a potion that will allow them to have a child together.

so good, holy shit.

Comment posted by marriedman08 deleted Feb 9th, 2016

Would love a sequel to life with rarity

facehoof

That pun was not worthy of a facehoof. It's worthy of this:
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I just read this, and then Rarity said "Future husband"...

I only have one request, good sir.
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I already loved the first story, but this one is even better!! :) Have a like on both of them.

P.S: I hope that we maybe see also a sequel of this story?

I Like this Sequel very hot e romance. Nice Work. :heart: :pinkiehappy:
there was a point that I thought Rarity had said that she was pregnant (and it would be a nice twist to think)
see you

I love this one! You need a proof reader tho (if you have one he's not doing his job)

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I was thinking the same thing, a wedding fic, etc

“Indeed young man. We don’t know much of your species and it’s just to make sure you don’t further injure yourself,” Urgent Care explained.

Couldn't they scan the other leg to compare them and get a more accurate time scale for healing?

This is really good, I wonder why I never found it sooner.

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