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MajorFrostwing


Just want to write some good stories

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This story is a sequel to A Blind Delight


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Brought back from the dead and Featured 01/18/2020
Thrice now.

Season 2 of A Blind Delight is here. Trevor is back after his victory in the tournament and is ready to settle down with his new marefriend Cloudkicker. but during a little excursion to a club Trevor makes the worst mistake of his life. He runs away from Ponyville to find a way to rid him of the problem he should have dealt with when it wasn't that big of a problem.

Darkness takes hold of Equestria without anyone noticing the signs of his return. The signs are all there for the shadow's of a king are beginning to take shape. Who will be able to stop this threat that dared rear it's ugly head? Will Trevor ever be rid of Shade? Stay tuned for more ABD Season 2.

((Same thing as last time folks.))

((Contains anthro ponies if you don't like it then don't read I'm not gonna look at you any differently than I already do... I love you guys sometimes))

((Final note I do not mean to offend anyone by writing this and making the main character blind. Again I mean no offense to anyone you know who may be blind. This is strictly a work of fiction and should not be taken seriously as truth. Respect disabilities and understand that they never wanted them to begin with. That is all and please enjoy the story for what it is worth.))

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 73 )

Well, it seems that our dear Trevor is suffering from Shade's constant influence. I wonder how he will deal with the fact that he is beginning to lose himself. Will he reject help, or will he accept the help of his love and friends? Time to wait until the next chapter!

I'm going to expect Cloudkicker to go and find Trevor anyways...

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Trevor is being charged with the assault of that pony in the club. Celestia was always weary of Trevor and now she thinks Trevor will only harm those around him so she wants him in custody as soon as possible.

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Now that I think about what you said you are right. I will fix it so it is correct.

ZOMG! the sequel we all where waiting for!

Well crap I don't know what to say

huh no more chapters(flips a table) FUCK by the way love the story.

5898941 I am currently working on chapter 6 & 7 please try to be patient with me I have been going through a lot in my personal life so I need some time to get everything how I want it.

Yesss new chapter!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: Oooo mysterious voice calling him? Might as well follow it!:pinkiecrazy: cant wait for the next chapter :twilightsmile::yay::moustache:

Something is gonna happen soon. I can feel it.
:trixieshiftleft:

Another good chapter. can't wait for more

I love this story
possibly I am exaggerating but I remember my favorite TV series Samurai Jack
It is strong but not invincible
lost fights but give wisdom
trevor reminds me a bit of jack

I look forward to the next chapter

greetings and good luck

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I am working on chapter 11 so don't worry it will come in time.

holy crap I was not expecting that. that hit me like the time I was hit by a car. HARD

6054522 It hit me hard when I had to write it and by that I mean I hit my desk with my head as I was exhausted to all hell. I still think I did good on it.

6054571 hahaha I know how that feels except for me its music and lyrics and you did a great job. :pinkiehappy:

I hope you really explain shade later, i am honest with you if i say it is nothing bad till now, he is just there, but i am not sure if i understand him, it just seems that some people know shade from another story/movie or whatever.
I have to read the rest later today, have to go to work.
Sady there was a timeskip, but i hope nothing to serious happened in the time.

OH NO ITS DONE!!! im sad now :fluttercry:

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It's not done I am just at a wall right now and I am trying to get past it. Don't worry this story will return.

This...this right here is some awesome shit

You're missing a bunch of punctuation, and you should write the word instead of the number. It's one or two keystrokes at most, so don't be lazy.

7419543 punctuation is not my strong suit as with all of my work since I don't have an editor. Also I normally use numbers and try to go back and get them but I forget to do it sometimes.

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

7424409 AAGGGGRRRRRREEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!

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... I'm working on it guys please be patient.

7467768 I'm not rushing you I was just agreeing with subject_crimson that we want more

7467698 YYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

7467850 yyyyaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!:yay:

...Two hours.

I found, and subsequently binge-read both of these stories in just under two hours.

Suddenly, hiatus.

...

7531827 I'm currently working on the next chapter so worry not.

At this point comments consist of

MOAR:flutterrage:

moar plz:pinkiesad2:

I honestly think that Neighpan is the dumbest name ever. Isn't there a better name for that? For the dessert place you could've called it Fillia or Iria. Those are more unique names and would fit...though at first glance it doesn't really fit does it. Another name I could think of is Udlah.

kusarigama Is another name for the sickle and chain...just thought I'd throw that out there:twilightsmile:

Japneigh Is an even dumber name than the last neighpan:rainbowlaugh:

"Trevor our apprentice." Tengu said with a smile. "Through hardship and pure determination you have passed our final test. You are now a master, a master of emotions. Without a hint of regret we welcome you to our ranks as a fellow master. Normally we would give you a tittle to go with master-hood but for you we will allow you to chose your own name to go by." Trevor moved his head down looking at his aura shift and move around him.

When I read this it reminded me of a couple things though I'm not sure why. As for titles go I think Trevor The Master of Sound would be a good title for him. Does anyone agree?
Also Sombra appears and doesn't fail miserably...I like this. It's a bit unexpected, but alright.
( Here was the song I was listening to while reading this)

YEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAA BOOOOOOOOOOYYYYYYYYYY

Yup, I have no idea what's going on in this story.

Iiiiiiiittttttsssss bbbaaaaacccccckkkkkk bbbbbbooooiiiiiisssss!

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