Princess Mi Amore Cadenza had always been happy when she was a student at Canterlot Academy, being a Foal-sitter to Twilight Sparkle, and going to be marrying Shining Armor soon. There's just one thing that is missing from her whole life; her little brother named Norvail Winder. Last time she spoke to him while she is foal-sitting Twilight, he said that he needed some time alone, talking about some things and learning about the real truth.
After 10 long years of traveling, Norvail has returned home from the human world. Only this time, he isn't in a happy mood when trouble has surfaced and now everything is really going out of control in his life. Now every pony including his sister is in danger and nothing will make him leave his home again if things need to call in for drastic measures.
You know people can only dislike a story once, as disappointing as that can be sometimes, also...
If your story being good is dependant on references, then do not expect many likes coming your way
Not Bad
i think, i will watch this fanfics and See what comes Next. 
Interesting idea
You shoud find an editor grammar is laking
I'm on the fence right now but I will keep reading for now
7035521 No I'm not expecting a lot of like, but I could just put in a few references to this story. To at least lighten the mood a little.
7035704 Don't worry, things will become unexpected to anyone.
7035534 There will more sight to see and shocking scenes before chapter 1 or 2 will start.
7035605 I'll Probably might think about it if I put in more than 7 chapters in this story.
*clap* *clap* *clap*
Worth the wait
The hell is that?
Are you f
ing kidding me?!
Y'know what? I planned on moving on after leaving my comment, and since I don't vote on stories that I haven't read at least part of, you wouldn't have seen a change either way. But now I'm gonna check it out, and I want you to know that I don't just hand out upvotes -- writers have to earn them.
(Also, "it's going to take some time"? If your story wasn't ready, maybe you shouldn't have published it yet.)
Edit: I'm trying to read it right now, and some advice comes to mind. You should probably try writing fiction in your native language, whatever that is, before you attempt to write anything in English.
7038263 Hmmmmmm nope, I'm still going to write the story anyways, but you do have a point though, writers will need to earn likes or dislike, no matter how the story is good or bad. They can only do their very best on how their writings are doing.
Yes, Norvail Winder is Cadence's little brother and he'll in a new dangerous life ahead of him in due time that he needs to prepare for battle. 
This needs a lot of work. A thorough read-through of the writing guide would be of considerable benefit to you, mostly for the list of typical do's and dont's.
7040367 Meh... I'll be putting this story on hold for now until I put in more chapters in a couple of my stories.