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MajorFrostwing


Just want to write some good stories

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Jack Ink a typical writer on Earth is visited by a strange creature. Twilight Sparkle a pony from equestria invites him to come to her world where will it go from there. Danger, love, and adventure Jack goes through everything to protect those around him to keep what he has now safe. He would sacrifice everything to do so but is he willing to give everything up to continue to protect this world.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 6 )

It wasn't bad there where a few parts where it's hard to follow but other than that good job

3668776 Thank you I wrote it on a whim so yea some parts I threw together and editted later I will be doing a mass edit when I get the rest posted

This is a really good story, only a couple mistakes but other than that, I liked a lot I hope you add the next chapter!!:pinkiehappy:

I got a bit excited seeing the next chapter got uploaded however I am somewhat diusapointed you put much to fast of a pace in this chapter it seams like their should have bean more detail during the date and at the hospital.

I can tell this has the swim problems as the last chapter and is pretty cheasy. The first chapter was good but the quality seamed to go down after that. And also

The End... Or is it?

really...

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I Will be going back to the story writing new short adventures and continuing the story.

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