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Writing is a new hobby of mine, and I want to share it with you. From my proud city I shall write and from there I will read. xluferx is similar to my name but I prefer Lufer
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I have a question too: what the fuck did I just read?
What the fuck just happened?
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I also question that when I wrote it
5417973 kinda a lot of things
Assumed mind bending, and if not then I have absolutely no idea. Other than that I'd say it was good. I like it.
This was so wierd that it actually somehow worked out in the end, and I don`t even understand how. Good job.
If I read it correctly, I'm going to guess that Celestia and Luna have a thing for "Domination" and "Evil Overlords", so Ish'zakk decided to play along with it, and use his "pre-reformed" abilities to aid them in that fetish... and in the process, he decided to use that "performance" as his proposal. (I didn't read through it all, so I don't know for sure. Kinda skipped the clippity-cloppity part, and just skimmed through to the end.)
Oh, and to support that theory, he said for Celestia to say "Cake" to stop everything.
The spelling and grammar in this...
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5418171 there isnt any clop. which is funny. like none at all. barely describes what they even look like except for saying that they are nude. they have wings and also a horn. then he changes them back.
all i see from this is a roleplay.
Well this was...different.
I guess I can definitely say that you certainly nailed down the feeling of helplessness, supplemented by the rather dark theme. Other than the various grammatical errors, that in itself would have made for a very nice grim/dark one-shot.
As for the twist, well...it certainly felt just a bit out of place to say the least, but I can't deny that I liked it turning out alright in the end. Won't lie, it brought a smile to my face.
What can I say? I'm a sucker for happy endings.
... god dannit, i wanted heart wrenching, gut smearing, blood drinking, all the standard evil things, and you did that, and more, but then you made it into the standard "it all turns out all right in the end"...
really wanted that to last.
this was really good. dont mind my grouching, this was worth every minute of reading.
edit: dont mind my grouching, i liked the way it ended, you dont have to apologize for my tastes, and if you did, then that would just be crazy, i actually really liked this, the twist was nice.
5422615 well thank you, i can give dark ends and good ones. But if you really want to find what you are looking for then ypu can look to my best story. Or search in the Dark group
Uuuuhhhh....Wat?
HOLY SHIT!!! THE AMOUNT OF ROLE PLAY IN THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and luna is a masochist.....NICE!
I uh...I'm not sure how i feel about this
5469670 if it is a good feeling then its okay!
5469679 I really liked the guy when he was evil, and kind of wished that it wasn't pretend.
This story... I- I can't even
Fuckin curve ball! O.o
Good story but the ending killed it for me.
That twist is just a bit dickish. Seriously, all that evil scenery chewing only to take a left at the final moment to a sudden, inexplicable romance plot.
I am so confused. So celeste and Luna like to be dominated and the guy did what they wanted? What the hell did I just read? It was good but what the hell did I just read
This should have been made to a full blown story instead have only 1 chapter
So I destroyed everything and killed everyone just to propose to them and then restored everything and they enjoyed it. My kind of girls.
ow my neck!