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xluferx


Writing is a new hobby of mine, and I want to share it with you. From my proud city I shall write and from there I will read. xluferx is similar to my name but I prefer Lufer

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I had been a tool for them, too many years passed in front of my eyes that I stopped counting them.

I came to your to land to complete the purpose which I see with utter disgust.

And failed...

and that was good.

You never knew of my existence until those kind souls presented me to you and your sister.

I never lied to any of you; instead I avoided your questions or merely responding them with half truths.

All of you together taught me to laugh again.

But you made me smile.

But they never capitulated; they wanted to finish what was started years ago.

That’s why I came to you that night; in seek for help or a simple advice, anything but what really happened.

But I don’t regret it.

Now the two of us stand in front of each other, only the victor would leave the battlefield…

Alive.

I can only hope you have the strength to deliver the final blow which I craved for so long.

I am only a tool after all.


*Welp, popular stories 03/07/2015. Thanks.*

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Comments ( 9 )

If I understand correctly, luna is dead ?

6163438 No, but how did you get to that? I thought i left it clear

6163621 Ahh, i can see it. partial error, with both reader (Bioskyrim) and Author at fault

6163438 how in the world you got that?

6163621

The dead weight that her arms were grabbing showed that she lost.

Nevermind, it's just that I didn't understand the begining.

In my mind, it was something like Gale had killed Luna with the Dagger, and it's hard for me to catch the meaning of this kind of sentences, because I'm not English, or American.

6164035 Me neither :rainbowwild:
English my second language afterall

Not quite sure if I understood everything. I think the man died (by suicide) and Luna wanted him to say something to her. What exactly should I take from the ending (sorry for asking but I'm curious).

6216088 Well it seems that I need to fix that last part:applejackunsure:

Anyways what I tried to do in the ending is that Gale say I love you to Luna because he never said it and didn't let Luna say it, but when he was about to say it Luna killed him using the dagger preventing him to say it.

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