• Member Since 22nd Dec, 2011
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Marshal Twilight


A smut-peddling armchair general with a love for writing and ponies.

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An M/M? lol don't find a lot of those. :rainbowlaugh:

And then I stopped what I was doing to read gay horse porn.

Fantastic.

Yay! More colt-cuddling goodness from Senpai Marshal!

Very hot. Very nice. Very unf.

Oh, wow. That was incredibly hot! I had a feeling you'd do the usual "use shampoo as lube" thing I see in a lot of shower fics, but Soarin's sneakiness was a real treat. I'd love to hear what Spitfire has in mind for them.... :rainbowwild:

I hopped on the internet with firm plans of furthering myself as an enlightened and educated human being.

Then this story popped up.

Thanks a lot.

Not a fan of M/M. But I have to give my complements to that title wordplay!

5323721 I'm not sure it's supposed to work like that, but this story has just get a like for your comment :derpytongue2:

Very hot and sexy colt cuddling. What more is there to say? You sir, are just plain awesome at this. Clop, that actually has a good story to it and build up that is every bit... okay almsot every bit, as great as the actual clop.

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That... sounds like it would sting. A lot.

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Yes, which is why it always bugs me, and why I'm glad it wasn't in this one! Never put something in your butt that you wouldn't put in your mouth! Once I had an incident with Tiger Balm that I... would not care to repeat.
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Isn't the cover from the Saddle-Up folio, the artist of which goes by Cassius?

Apparently Soarin and Thunderlane don't remember they've had sex before during the events of Thunderlane's Terrific Threesome:pinkiegasp:

we can safely assume then that this fic follows the events of the comic that was made for the saddle up art pack then?....

5323974 what's tiger balm?....

5324384 mmm , sounds like it would be the equivalent of rubbing some tea tree oil in the same sensitive areas eh?.....

I approve of this.

Lets just say I am jealous of Thunder.

Great fic by the way! i love it. Not to many M/M that I like here.

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Well i didn't know you were into M/M fics :raritywink:

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Is this just a little quirk of yours? Or maybe someone has a fancy for guy's... or guy horses :trollestia:

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:rainbowlaugh: A bit shy are we?

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don't thank me. I will soon get my answer :raritywink:


your welcome

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There is no fun in the hunt if the game does not give a little chase.

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Why thank you! I like a good sport. We need more players like you! Someone give this man a cookie!

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You mean you don't know for sure? ^_^

And thus, my sexuality has been successfully and sufficiently questioned.

And so the fic was hot and smutty. And I thought it... good.

Seems cute.
I'll add it to my Read Later.

>MFW I wake up and see this story:

i.imgur.com/eFUtxh9.jpg

Ahem, well, anyway...

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Too few, if you ask me.

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Man's got his priorities in order. You folks should pay attention. :eeyup:

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shampoo as lube

Eugh! That's even a thing!? I'll just say that when I was writing this story, the idea of using soap as lube didn't even occur to me. That would hurt.

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Yes. Artist name and his tumblr are both in the description.

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Kind of. Mainly just the setting (locker room at Wonderbolts Academy.) Otherwise the story is independent, although the comic was an inspiration. The bit that I cropped for cover art was particularly apt.

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Hey, that's the best I can hope for, isn't it? Story being good enough that it makes some people raise an eyebrow at their own boners.

"The two had a whole minute of bliss before realizing something was off.

A few of the other showers were still running, but all the conversation had stopped. The silence was deafening, and Thunderlane realized with dread just how much noise the two of them had been making toward the end. He turned his head to look at Soarin, and from the look on his face he too had realized the problem."

Thunderlane: GG?

“Lieutenant Soarin! Cadet Thunderlane! Front and center!” came Spitfire’s furious shout, her voice echoing throughout the locker room.

Soarin: Yeah, GG

MFW I read this story.

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M/M fics usually are downvoted. You however, as a well known and well written author, gain a lot of leeway in this regard.
You've built up enough followers to pretty much guarantee a feature on anything you write, assuming it's upto your standard quality. Also, you've built up a good reputation for yourself so readers are far more likely to give your story a chance rather than reflexively downvoting on content alone; new authors are rarely afforded the same.
Even then, you'll notice that the ratio for the story isn't quite what your stories usually garner. Just about any semi-coherent clop story will manage about a 10:1 ratio, with the majority of M/M stories faring considerably worse. Your own usually seem to manage a 20+:1 with regularity, however, your M/M ones often struggle to beat that 10:1 ratio. It's just the sad way of things when it comes to certain content on the site. Some users just reflexively downvote simply based upon the content of the story rather than the quality. Glad to see another story of yours hit the box regardless. :twilightsmile:

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Hmm. I see what you mean, actually. I punched in the numbers from some of my other fics, and I have gotten surprisingly good ratios for some of them. Better than this one, at least. Although I was actually expecting the story to be 'hindered' by the fact that it's M/M, I was still surprised that it only had seven downvotes when I got on this morning. Site doesn't have many M/M stories, and even less are written by authors that actually get featured regularly. Even if it does wind up being less popular than my other stories, I can at least say that I've done my part.

Besides, I really just wanted to write this particular story. :rainbowwild:

Im a man of fw words so ill make this quick....

Dont drop the soap:fluttershbad:

Dude... I'm so glad I'm bi, I enjoy the best of both worlds in both clop and life. So much eye candy everywhere.:pinkiecrazy:

5325205 i only get the best of both worlds in fan-fiction.... I'm so lonely :(

5323721 I'd pay out the nose for a ringtone of the actual Willem Dafoe saying that.

gay horse porn in the feature box... what has fimfiction come to....

I'm straight. I mean I love boobs as much as the next straight guy, but reading stuff like this makes me question my sexuality a little.

Either way it was a great read.

Now, back to Pokemon Omega Ruby.

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