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The Abyss


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I'm a sucker for some cute Thunderlane X Soarin smut :heart:

Oh hell yes, exactly what I was looking for.

So adorable. :rainbowkiss: I usually don't read stallion x stallion stories, but thanks to your story I will read more. Thanks. ~ free hug

jxj

Busy right now. I'll definitely give it a read when I have a spare minute.

oh this is simply awesome! I have never read a M/M fic before but I already love it! I can't wait for the next chapter! :rainbowkiss:

A nice start can't wait to read more.

Could have done without all the stuff about twitching and sheaths.

Other than that it was pretty nice.

I think this is an adorable start. Of course I know there's going to be sex later which will be slightly less adorable. I'm more into snuggling. But for now. :twilightsmile:

Oooo! I just love these fics that are so adorable! All the feels and stuff are awesome.

I like this very much. Thank you for turning it into an actual story, rather than just a clopfic. Don't get me wrong, I won't mind at all if there is some sex later, but having an actual build-up to an eventual payoff is SO much more satisfying. I want to care about the characters, and you're doing a fantastic job of it.

Thanks for the showing, but don't stop now! I want to see them build a relationship before anything actually happens. Something a bit more long-term than a couple of chapters would be excellent.

jxj

Really good first chapter, the pacing seems good and I like how it doesn't go straight to sex. Can't wait for more.

I got finally back to reading after a loooong time and this is the first and newest story I found, I am glad I read it, really lovely, god i love cuddling. :rainbowlaugh:

Anyway, keep up the great work you are doing. :raritywink:

I am VERY much looking forward to this one!

Comment posted by Fenrac deleted Apr 20th, 2016

Yasssssss(YESSSSSSS) ANOTHER SOARLANE.:raritystarry:
"Woh calm down dude:unsuresweetie:"
NEVER I'VE BEEN WAITING FOREVER FOR ANOTHER ONE!!!
Sorry about that:facehoof:
But yeah, this was really good and I hope it's continued. Thank you for making a Soarlane:pinkiehappy:

Hnnnnnggg... Too cute Abyss.... *puts self on heart transplant list* I love cuddle scenes...

[Waiting intensify]

Like the build up. If I could I'd go into the damn future to read this.:twilightsmile:

I need this so badly I check the story every day to see if it's updated

7211089 You don't need to do that. If you've favorited the story, or if you're following me, I always blog about a new chapter about a day before I release it. So if I haven't blogged about it, then I haven't uploaded anything.

MOOOARRR... Plz Abyss-Senpai. I NEED my smut! :fluttershysad:

You know, that was really cute. Soarin's bluntness regarding the topic of sex was also somewhat funny.
Looking forward for more. :twilightsmile:

I am very much looking forward to the next chapter! :heart: :twilightsmile:

I absolutely love scrambled eggs with cheese and salsa mixed in, with a big dollop of sour cream on top.

...Too bad I've recently developed allergies against tomatoes, peppers, and dairy. :pinkiesad2:

7305429 And it's not just jalapenos or bell peppers, either. ANY nightshades of any description. Do you realize how many things have paprika in them? And chili pepper? I can't even eat mayonnaise anymore unless I make it myself or buy exorbitantly expensive specialty food off Amazon or something. And go look at all the things in the grocery store that have "spices" as an ingredient. There's no way to tell WHAT'S in that, and I can't risk being put down with a crippling migraine for half a week, just for that.

So, yeah.

Hurrah! The smut is back! Cannot WAIT for the next chapter!
:rainbowkiss: :yay:

good stroy i hope to see move good work from you

I love this so far. Can't wait for more! :rainbowkiss:

jxj

It's good to see this update again. I'm really liking the pacing. It's obvious that sex is coming, but it's not being rushed.

MOAR Please I Ship them soo hard

That's a really great story. Just from the first chapter it beats other finished ones by style, all the details and emotions I feel from it.
Keep on, I appreciate the great masterpiece ongoing.

Very good, I'm definitely looking forward to more of this story! Keep it up!

I am absolutely in love with this! It's cute, it's well-written, and it's reasonably paced. There were even a few moments where I was saying to myself things like, "man, don't do that. You're going to regret it..." And he didn't! I wanted to give him a pat on the back.

I don't care if this is explicit; it's going in my public favorites. I look forward to reading more chapters!

Great job, kinda wish there was more

Another great chapter, cute. Looking forward to the next one.

Hell yeah, plot and pacing. Let's do this.

Might be my favorite story being written right now on fimfiction, pls write moooore!

I like the way this story is different than others. Sooooo adorable I might get adorabetes <3 I want mooar :D

sorry I said I would read it way sooner, but I was only able to read a part of it and take a quick look till now.

For my liking they had sex to fast, I mean if I remember it right it was this story where it happened in the first story.
It is just not how I like it to start, but maybe it is better if I read the whole thing.

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