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For something "quick," this was incredibly well done! Like with ASS... uh, maybe we shouldn't abbreviate that story...
A-Anyway! Like A Shining Sunday, you did a damn good job of capturing emotions within the clop, making the relationship seem real while still paying enough attention to the erotic elements to make it erotic. Fantastic job.
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Thank you! That's the big thing with me. I love happy emotions.
And with all the butt fun in ASS, it makes sense to abbreviate it as such!
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Well, you can never have too much butt!
This is...surprisingly original. Anthro Luna I've seen before, Big Macintosh I've seen before, however I've never seen him as a submissively to a dominant Luna. I never would have thought of this, good job on your part.
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I am the queen of subby Big Mac!
I've always seen him as sweet and shy, which is why he's always so quiet.
There's also the bit where he's the only stallion fit for a princess (Barring my Horsebando Shining Armor)
What is that?
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Play on the term "Waifu" only for stallions.
5169504 Hm...interesting.
That was beautiful.
Delightfully kinky and certainly nothing to leave a bad taste in your mouth, this was excellent. The descriptions were vivid, ans Luna's personality and dialogue, suburb.
I'm very glad you're back, and I look forward to more.
And as for an image to convey my approval:
i.imgur.com/ho9avp1.png
Well. That was sexy.
This is so amazingly good! Femdom is best thing.
You have talent, have a like, a favorite, AND a watch!
37 ounces = 2.3125 pounds
Damn Luna knows how to work it
5188388 Ounces by volume =\= ounces by weight
this was adorable. Also I dare say I can definitely see moonbutts sexuality express itself this way. she felt completely in characther.
Should there be more?
I think there should be more.
Awesome fic.
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^ This. So Much.
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY THAT WAS AWESOME!
I found a few things you may want to edit.
I suggest adding a comma between "chest" and "walking".
And that shouldn't be capitalized.
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Wow, can't believe I missed that. Thanks for the heads up, hon!
Hah, you really went there didn't you Luna?
I found this quite enjoyable. I'm also wondering if you plan to continue with these two beyond this story, I many possibilities (and a few awkward moments).
I came by this originally as a youtube reading. And I have to say that this is easily one of my favorite fics. Just well done. ^^