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mrdojo18


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One word...

DAYUM!

This story rocks!

Amazing story, I think theres nothing more ridiculous than this story, but at the same time I like to read twimac fanfiction.

It may be an 'ugly whore of a story', but she's our 'ugly whore of a story'(the readers').

stuff like this is guilty pleasure material. However, i do suggest you stop that noobery stuff if you want more people to read. Keep improving your writing too.

5544089 Meh, if people don't find the crap I write entertaining or amusing or sexy, that's perfectly fine with with me. To me it's all in good fun and IMO doesn't need too much professionalism.

I am curious as to what you mean by improving my writing. Is it repetition of words? Grammar? I'm all for hearing details here.

Deffo one of the better clop I've read in a while :yay:

5545318 There's always room for improvement. You could try better descriptions of things, or write a good battle, or even some slice of life. Writing is like art except our words are our paint, it's our ability that can make a great fic.

Food for thought.:twilightsmile:

... The Eminem Reference.

I doth my cap good sir. I doth my cap.

5547015 I swear it wasn't intentional to start with. :pinkiehappy:

5546699 I actually have a few stories not on here that are non-clop, and I have re-written one of them to the best of my ability but I don't feel as if it's really all that great as it is an OC story, plus one of them is a script story I did a couple years ago for schoolwork so that's automatically a no go.

That was a awesome beyond awesome read I hope they start dating.

All I have to say is...

YAY TWIMAC!

Good Lord...:rainbowlaugh:

I sure that there will be a sequel here soon, please let there be, I would love to see even more TwiMac stories

If Big Macintosh was a cartoon, he would probably have hearts in his eyes right now due to the fondness he was feeling towards Twilight. Unbeknownst to Mac, he was a Cartoon, but since cartoons do not realize they are cartoons, he probably did have heart shaped glare in his eyes, and just was not aware since…well…I’ve said too much nonsensical noobery already so I’ll just stop here.

I love this paragraph in a way words cannot explain.

"The two enjoyed a rather long, heavenly ascension to that orgasmic paradise. Big Mac had placed about a litre of cum inside twilight,"

You forgot to capitalize "Twilight" :twilightsmile:

Mrdojo18, can you make the other involving with Princess Luna and milk stuff?

AND BIG MAC X PRINCESS TWILIGHT SPARKLE DECIDED TO GET MARRIED AND HAVE FOALS!!!

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