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To be continued in Love is Magic part 2 – A Big decision...
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Huh, okay. So Big Mac is a gigolo? Hmm, well I guess I'll have to see what happens next...
To be honest, not very funny at all. Twilight getting her hopes built up by well-meaning but idiot friends, having her heart broken, then deciding to fix her problems with mind control is somewhere between sad and really fucked up.
>>brijbee ...So I'm the supervillian that you wants to kill - Was it really that bad? XD
>>Maclaren
I do hope so
>>fireflutterpony It's kindoff the point to be, but yeah :/ It's not my best of works (the first isn't usually that great). It was a test... I'm actually surprised to currently have more thumbs up than thumbs down so ^^
Also: Should I remove those parenthezies-discussions? I'm getting more and more uncertain of having those there anyway :/
Thanks for your time.
hmmm, I like the plot and some of the random things made me giggle, but I was a little confused with who was speaking sometimes. good story, just a little confusing
hmmm, Interesting. I'd like to see more interaction between Rainbow Dash and Big Mac. Just because i never really see them interact that much in other stories and would like to see what you do with their interactions.
I also think this story could do well if Dash showed guilt in causing this, both for Twilight and Big Mac.
Really fucked up. I hate drugs of any kind. I believe you should keep your stories to yourself. I came here to read good writing with clopping, not this load of farce.
>>>>Equestrium Drugs? o___o There are no drugs in this shit as far as I remember.
lol, it's nice to see that her priorities are in order. As for the magical coercion of her new beau into loving her... I can accept this; it's only going to result in hilarity when her friends get involved. Also, I look forward to seeing more interaction between Mac and Dash. Please, for the love of God in heaven, continue the story!
Considering he's the ONLY dragon in Ponyville, that "probably" is a pretty damning indictment.
XD
I know Mac is doing this as a favor and doesn't really need to get all the little details right (like his partner's name), but DAMN, that was funny!
It really is worth mentioning twice.
No, but certain fanfictions can!
Attagirl! You're Celestia's faithful ****ing student! You don't let no farm stud turn you down!
This is clearly the next step on Twilight's path to becoming a supervillain. I approve.
Yeah, mind-rape (in assistance to ACTUAL rape) has a way of nagging one's conscience.
... Oh. Okay, then.
Well, on the plus side, bearing his foal will give way more weight to the relationship you've constructed out of magic, lies, and sheer expectation.
I would expect Big Mac to be the last pony to be nonchalant and resentful about getting a mare pregnant, but I can forgive that characterization for the sake of pimpness. At least he learned his lesson.