The Lady's Plus One

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Mistershield

Mistershield #1 · May 14th, 2013 · 2 · ·

There on the porch was the largest member

Hm... Freudian slip?

PureNexus

PureNexus #2 · May 14th, 2013 · · ·

Well alrighty then.

I definitely see this stories potential.

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Lateinshowing

Lateinshowing #3 · May 14th, 2013 · · ·

Interesting so far. But still leaves some questions, like when is this time-line wise, what's the relationship/closeness with friends after moving (canterlot isn't too far, but it isn't same town close like before), ect.

Shrapmo

Shrapmo #4 · May 14th, 2013 · · ·

Great so far! Some editing slips occured though. Do you have a beta reader?

AralynSugar

AralynSugar #5 · May 14th, 2013 · · ·

I plan to expand on such setting matters in the next chapter.R>>2576464

AralynSugar

AralynSugar #6 · May 14th, 2013 · · ·

I don't have a beta reader, I'm rather new to such features. Ill be sure to work on the errors.2576473

Lateinshowing

Lateinshowing #7 · May 14th, 2013 · · ·

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Figured you'd cover it in later chapters.

Inferno demon Dash

Inferno demon Dash #8 · May 15th, 2013 · · ·

Other then a few errors and very much making sure to separate when others are speaking as well as your paragraphs I'm very seriously impressed, there is no way this could be your first time writing, I don't believe it. You done very good and I really like this pairing, it's a slow romance but one worth looking over with a smile, I cannot wait for more