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YAY!, I've been waiting for this.
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ya, im in the middle of making chapter 3, well 2 at the moment. hope you and many more enjoy!
I'll be waiting for updates, I can't wait to see where this goes
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okay, wish me luck
okay everypony, I'v finished making adjustments to the prolog, hope you enjoy.
I am now intrigued. Cant wait for more updates
A couple grammar notes for future writing:
End all dialogue with some for of punctuation. The biggest issue here is a lack of a comma before the rest of the sentence.
It's spelled prologue
Unless this is an oc pony I don't know about, the teacher is Cherilee, like the fruit not the action of loud emotional support.
Drop the whole -insert music- thing. Either it's important enoughto describe or doesn't need to be mentioned at all. Also, the -that's what she said- bit counts as MST style writing and could get you banned (don't worry, I'm not here to report just give friendly advice).
Best advice I can give any writer: read your work aloud word by word to make sure you've avoided grammatical errors.
If you develop these skills, you can have potential.
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ouch, but i guess constructive criticism is a good thing right? anyway ya, i see my flaws now, going to go change that now, Thank you. If you see any more flaws or have any more tips, please feel free to comment.
Moving to next chapter!
this is gonna be good!
You should try hearing the episode and reading the story! It's an awesome synch! Almost like a audiobook but about 20% cooler!
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Ya lol I intended for that a little, but not entirely, part 3 (chapter 2) is where it gets interesting. Enjoy my friend
That walked in on moment.
795390 i was going to make it disturbing...but that would have dropped the interest rate
I cant wait for the next chapter!
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I love this story more than the main part, I don't think there are many storys of rainbow being a virgin, but still I felt D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww throught that part.
848878 I'll try to get another chapter in, but I don't have internet sooo
... Ya
850036 ha well ain't that the truth lol, but I didn't want to stray away from the main story, but at the same time I wanted yall to get an okay clop scene your going to love the Big Mac/Cherilee clop scene, I can tell.
okay i need to know, who wants me to continue this.
922794 ME oh and hey there. I just wanted to say that this story is really well done. Better than my usual fic and plus WAY better than my attempt to do a clop scene.
Anyways keep up the good work my friend
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To all of yall who are awaiting on future updates, I am sorry to say but it will be postponed even longer. I do not have a computer with internet access so...ya. But fear not, once I get it back, I will start again!
This is an interesting concept. I love it!
2717804 I am glad you enjoyed it. Be sure to spread the word of this Fic. I am currently working on the next chapter, and plan to have it up by tomorrow.
The reason the next chapter is taking so long is my mind has forgotten how to type clop. But, rest assured that it will be up soon... hopefully.
Twilight had sex with a stallion?
3589804 I know what you mean, I think he's linking this chapter to another story we're working on...Heh heh heh heh