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deadpansnarker


Also known as ‘Snarky’, ‘The Snarkster’ and ‘Hey, You!’

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An alternate take on events during Hearts And Hooves Day, where after they drink the love potion, Cheerilee and Big Mac take things just a little too far.

And by 'a little', of course I mean 'a lot'.

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:rainbowkiss: PFFF-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Oh those three are SOOOOOOO GROUNDED!! :rainbowlaugh:

I loved this!:heart:

I like the story premise; but is there any sex in this?

8546074 Inevitably. :pinkiesmile:

8546081 Thanks. It was a blast to write, too. :twistnerd:


8546117 Maybe a bit. But nothing graphic, since it's rated T. :scootangel:

You should do a sequel where Cheerliee is pregnant and Mac is with Sugar Belle now. Although save that for Valentine's day

SugarMac is canon now, and you can't do anything about it.

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Who said I wanted to? :raritywink:

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We'll see. :pinkiesmile:

:ajbemused: I wear a STETSON pard , Only city slickers wear a fedora !
:duck: Even my Spikey Wikey knows the difference between a Stetson, Fedora and a Bowler....
:moustache: Bowlers are cool playing piano in the bar
:twilightoops: BAR?
:raritywink: Spikey only drinks with me...
:moustache: It's grand to see Rarity laying on a piano.
:facehoof:
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I'm sure the writer is aware of that this story was just for fun! Plus this story was set before Sugar even existed!

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Fortunately, by the wonders of editing, Applejack is now wearing the right headgear. :pinkiehappy: And hi to the rest of the group. :scootangel:

".....I mean that really got out of hand." Damn Big Mac and Cheerilee really got a lot of Stamina to have been going at it that long and cause so much property damage.

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Yep. I'm not really a shipper of either group, and getting into an argument with either side seems a bit pointless. My motto is: take the fic for what it is, and don't look for any preferences regarding couplings and whatnot. :twistnerd:

I BLAME TWILIGHT SPARKLE!!!!

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:moustache: Wow that was one big knock down drag out , Who won?

:scootangel: Looked like Mac was on top more

:applecry: reminded me of pigs in the mud making bacon

:unsuresweetie: or Spike and Rarity playing peek a boo in her supply closet.

:raritystarry:

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:trollestia: that's my little ponies

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Oh, whew! Thanks! :3

So it's more like mentions of doing the do?

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I don't go into great detail, but yes something like that. :rainbowwild:

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Don't we all? :trollestia:

This was great! And somehow all written in a southern accent of sorts. :/

Is there such a thing as XX or XXX?

I just read this story and have to say, it was quite funny, good work :)

big mac: and that son is the story of how you were conceived

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