What really happened on hearts and hooves day. My own personal twist on the whole situation. Did Big Mac and Cherilee actually fall under a spell, or was it true love at the get go?
732229 ouch, but i guess constructive criticism is a good thing right? anyway ya, i see my flaws now, going to go change that now, Thank you. If you see any more flaws or have any more tips, please feel free to comment.
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ya, im in the middle of making chapter 3, well 2 at the moment. hope you and many more enjoy!
I'll be waiting for updates, I can't wait to see where this goes
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okay, wish me luck
I am now intrigued. Cant wait for more updates
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ouch, but i guess constructive criticism is a good thing right? anyway ya, i see my flaws now, going to go change that now, Thank you. If you see any more flaws or have any more tips, please feel free to comment.
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Ya lol I intended for that a little, but not entirely, part 3 (chapter 2) is where it gets interesting. Enjoy my friend