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Sex-ed? My emotions are surging. The only way to avoid emotional explosion is to express it, using my native tongue. ASTIG!!!
Artwork is by harwicks.
Will read laters...
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Thanks so much <3~.
That was truly hilarious and awesome.
Well done.
I await more.
2282847 You don't quit, do you?
Aren't they... like, 10?
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I'm glad you guys like the story :3.
Not sure how to react to the story being put in "Struggling Writers" groups, but that's ok, because it's being shared, and shared is good :3. Yay.
Thanks guys, I'll hopefully come out with more and get a dedicated editor soon~.
This gonna be good. The sheer potential for awkwardness could make it.
2283020 Well, I put it in every group I could find, so...
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When I was in school, I had to sit through Sex Ed in 4th and 5th grade if I remember right. So 10 sounds about right to me from my experience.
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Yay, thank you for that <3
Really good start, always love mature stories that build character development and give a good story, also very well edited, no mistakes grammar wise that I can recall
"Anyways, imagine your kids not being informed of these sorts of things, and how to be careful and follow our traditional values!"
Traditional values..? That phrase tends to light up a warning signal in my head. Though the superintendent appears to be a mostly reasonable guy. Mostly.
Especially compared to that repressed, neurotic bundle that is Cheerilee... Those were some strange fantasies her mind took her.
By the way: Wasn't Snip's best bud called Snails, or am I confusing him with somepony else?
One thing: Sisterhooves Special shows Sweetie Belle lives with her parents. She was just staying with her sister that week.
Applebloom would be a better example of a filly living with siblings.
good start
I'm here for the lulz, not the sex. But I wouldn't be opposed to sex as well. Keep up the good work!
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Very well written, i love the idea of it, it is well executed, i hope you get an editor soon, i would hate to see such a good story fizzle
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Yeah, lol owo. I had that revelation at 3 in the morning last night and was like "oh no" lol
Thanks guys for all of the support!
I like it!
This is amazing. I need more.
Oh god, I'm reminded of the part where we had to put the condom on the banana.
So akward...
in my experiences sex ed is tought around 11 but the CMCs are like seven or eight!!! they arent old enough for this stuff!!!!!!!!!!!!
the awkward is endless!!
aalso this is more teen then mature
Can't copypasta on my phone, but there's a sentence that starts with "There's more of a need for birth control..." Suggest rewording the first part, as the meaning gets distorted later. Something like "It's more critical than ever that these kids learn about..."
Other than that, great start. Lots of awkwardness to come.
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I was eleven or twelve during my first sex ed class, so that's not entirely inappropriate.
Poor Cheerilee, though. This fic isn't going in the same direction that similar musings of my own go, mine are... more odd. Put it this way; Apple Bloom's grown up on a farm, with livestock. There's a decent chance she's more knowledgable on the matter than anyone realises (although she'd probably need Applejack to explian exactly what those two pigs/cows/goats/etc were doing).
When you referred to "Snips and Snaps" I think you meant "Snips and Snails"
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
good, with a nice flow of the plot.
looking forward to the next chapter
"Lol, a story about sex ed won't go very far! I'll just write a chapter to be silly, I bet nobody is even going to like it"
>Becomes my most viewed story.
lol. Still, thanks for all of the support. I have to spend some time thinking of where I want the plot to go, since I never expected it to be more than this, but new chapters will be out soon. Yay.
I'll also look on getting a dedicated editor for this story.
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It's also a single classroom for multiple levels of education (I would assume that not all the young ponies in Ponyville are the same age) and plus I remember my last year in elementary school before going to middle school they had a whole day of curriculum where they separated us by gender and taught about puberty. Not so much sex, I think they briefed it and moved on, but there was a lot of mumbo-jumbo about our 'changing bodies' and all that and they handed out deodorant to the boys and girls and girls also got tampons.
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Sweet, free deodorant.
Lol I bet Applebloom is going to end up knowing more than either of them would have ever imagined and it's gonna send them for a loop.
"Applebloom, sweeite, I'm here to teach you about seh- about seh seh... about how babies are made."
"You mean like sex?!"
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Meh it was Old Spice, I'm partial to Axe.
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omg that's actually a good idea like omg.
2288319 Well as 2293166 said
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omg yay.
I was going to have that kind of things with Fluttershy since like she's an animal thing and stuff but like nigga Applebloom is younger so it'd be like "how silly"
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It would be more ironic if Fluttershy was a sex fanatic
I don't ordinarily read clopfics (I'm a bit like Cheerilee in that regard here.
).... but I find the awkwardness of this funny.
You get an upvote just for that idea.
I wrote some of Chapter 1 today.
It's absolute shit.
Maybe it's because I'm used to writing very plot-driven expressive fics instead of light-hearted diolouge based fics but it seems so rushed. I'll get it worked out, though, as well as discuss the idea with multiple people to make sure everything is going a-ok, as well as plan for the future. (Break From Reality is currently on hold because of a controversial unpublished chapter that I need to discuss with my editor, so I'll be devoting some effort to this)
As I said, thanks once again for the support. It kind of puts a lot of pressure on me, since I've never had a story get this popular, especially on its first publication with only a prologue. I'll try to not dissapoint, though~
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oh shit nigga.
I'll change that ASAP, since I've experienced too many instances of "It's a nicely written story but YOU WROTE PERSON INSTEAD OF PONY, DOWNVOTE", lol owo
Am i the only one who never had to take a sex-ed class in High School/ Middle School.
Aww, judging by how prudish they all are, I don't expect some delicious debauchery like teaching the foals..."first hoof".
Still, if not that, then I wonder where this'll go...
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I don't know, I've seen the same thought brought up in the past, but would animals on the Apple farm really behave like they do on ours? Since they're rather more intelligent...
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Cows seems to be, yes, as are mules and other such equines. The pigs we've seen, on the other hand, not so much, and let's not even start on what we've seen of goats...
man i read this story a few weeks ago and i really hope you expand on it, a ton of potential
WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS SHIT! It has a random tag! Fimfiction is a sight not meant for random fanfictions! What! The! Hell!
more please