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CrackedInkWell


"Inspiration does not come to the lazy. It only comes to those who call it." - P. I. Tchaikovsky

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A short, one-shot, slice of life story of the famous twin "sales ponies," Flim and Flam.

In an alternative universe on their way to Filliedelphia, one of the twin brothers comes out to the other as gay. How would the other react to this revelation?

Authors note: This is just only a simple coming out story. If you don't like stories like these, you know how to exit the screen to look for a different story. If you find some grammar error in it or have a suggestion on how to fix it, please let me know in the comments below so I can fix this as soon as possible. And please be constructive.


A special thanks to SecretBrony01 for proofreading this.

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Comments ( 9 )

A story where a family member accepts the one coming out can be just as emotional as one where they disown them. Good show.

Comment posted by CrackedInkWell deleted Nov 26th, 2014

Nice to see someone else reads the comics:twilightsmile:. Great story too.

Before I spoil the score, I would like to point out that the view count is 69 :trollestia: I feel compelled to read it now.

Short and sweet, but not much meat... and I didn't mean that in a rude way. :derpytongue2: This could have been a bit longer, but it works as is. Nice.

I mean it's nice that Flam is so accepting--and actually, I'd expect no less--but if I were Flam and my brother had just screwed over my chance with the mare I loved just to prove he wasn't gay, I'd be pretty pissed off. That part I wouldn't forgive so easily. I think it would have been stronger not to pull that aspect in or to deal with it more.

Short but sweet. I'll have to check out more of your work!

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