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Bluegrass Brooke


Gonna try this whole writing thing again.

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Bluegrass sits at her keyboard, mulling over her latest idea. "Oooh this would be really awesome! Oh . . . wait . . . that doesn't fit in the story anymore. Argh!"

What is it?

"Er, a really awesome and cute scene! But, it won't work now . . ."

Why don't you make a story?

"I did, and it doesn't fit!"

No, no, no. A story for the stuff that doesn't fit into the regular story! Then you could take requests from your readers for scenes they wanted to see too.

"Oh . . . that'll work."


Really and truly I have too many ideas that I wanted to fit in. I originally wrote this as a thank you story for 200 followers. Thanks everyone! I really appreciate the support, I can't express how much it means to me.


Tags vary incredibly by segment. Probably more slice of life than romance. Some will be happy, others sad, and a few will be incredibly serious/dark.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 19 )

That was FREAKING cute!!!! Great chapter. I think you are doing a great job. I loved how these short stories are. Good luck with the next part.

More Flim and Flam excellent. :pinkiehappy:

His lied with financial management,

lay

That was awesome, now who's the bugger who disliked this? You my good sir/madam must be touched in the head.

“I moved it from her,” he pointed to a spot on the floor, “to there,”

here
Awwwwwwwwwwww!!!! :heart: That was so cute~! Little Spike has someone to practice shooting fire with! :pinkiehappy:
Not only that, but now there's a Great Reckoning that leads to more of Discord's past. This is going to get interesting. :trixieshiftright:

I don't remember when, but I remember asking you about Spike/Discord bromance, so you have no idea how happy this chapter made me.

:pinkiehappy: Eeee! I'm loving the little mini stories you have set up for us to enjoy while we wait for the sequels! Both this chapter and the previous one are lovely!

I'll be tracking this for sure!

I like this little interlude. I was wondering what they were doing after Flim found Flam. It's nice to have know a snip of what is going on.

Such a mature subject had never been brought up by Havic.

I'm not entirely sure if you spelled it that way before, but if not, it's spelled 'Havoc'

Now he would have given anything to understand the cause. Could this be normal for draconequus?

either 'draconequii' or 'a draconequus' would work better, to me anyway.

Touching chapter, not really full of 'feels' as I was thinking it was going to be, but still, it's nice.

That was good. I loved how Discord had to deal with those urges. Who knew that the male Draconques experienced that. Thanks for the update. This was great to read.

What Templar said, you've called Discord's dad Havoc in your others.

5930579 Yeah, that was a typo with Havoc. However, for like the hundredth time, draconequus is a collective noun in my universe. It's always draconequus, even if there's a group of them.

This is a great snippet of a chapter! I really like it. If this doesn't become cannon to TCARW, it would be nice if something along the lines of this became cannon to it.

The only things I could spot that might need some editing are:

Discord gritted his teeth stretching out on the aging stones and trying to calm the tremors coursing through his body.

It might be fine, but it feels like it needs a comma there after teeth.

I’m putting my internal organs under an under extreme strain.

An extra under there. :pinkiesmile:

Again, this was a lovely chapter! I'm glad that you decided to start 'Interlude With A Donkey'. It provides me with BB universe goodness while I'm waiting for the sequels! :pinkiehappy:

5931514 :twilightblush: What would I do without you lovely pre-readers? Glad you liked this one, I personally enjoy scenes like this, though why is anyone's guess. I can't wait to write Lesson One, but I've got to finish Slow Fade first. This is my way of coping I suppose! XD

There is no threat to the nation quite as great as complaisance.

complacency

See that it never takes hold of you, Discord

Add ze green. Otherwise Havoc seems like a bit of an idiot.

Another shot of loneliness feels followed by something heart warming. Lovely as usual.

Awwwwww cute! :heart: Jazzel is best bar owner.

LOOOOOOOOVE IT! You truly are gifted.
-ThePortalPonies

I really like this Jazzel person! Is she going to be canon? :D

It took a day and a half but while bored at the factory I suddenly realized that Jazzle = gazelle which is a similar animal to an oryx, and I was very impressed and felt kinda silly for not noticing it sooner.:twilightsheepish:

I would like to read what that conversation was!

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