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Butterscotch Cream


Everyone has a story. The question to ask is, what do you want others to read in yours?

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Additional Tags: [M/M Shipping]
Caramel has a special someone in mind and asks Braeburn's advice.

Cover Art graciously provided by: http://vivitheheiwa.deviantart.com/

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Comments ( 23 )

D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW :fluttershysad: So Sweet! I love you for this!

That... WAS BUCKING ADORABLE! I still like the big mac x caramel shipping more, but this was absoulutley fabulous, I must say I am hoping for more.:pinkiehappy:

So sweet, then bam you pulled this

AAAAAAAAAAAAAPPLE-LOOSA

Made me laugh :D

ok um you do know that caramel is applejacks cousin right, along with breaburn..so your telling me with this story that they like cousin love???

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Actually, Caramel isn't canonically part of the Apple family, though that's a common "fanon" view. And there's nothing wrong with that view either! I've read some good stories that use Caramel as part of the Apple family. However, in this story I'm just going by strict canon where they aren't related. :)
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Omai. I wanna hear about why he screamed that.... *naughty naughty* :pinkiehappy:

... see now you gave me diabeetus. I hope you're happy.

That was beautiful work!:fluttercry:

For those who are wondering why this has been re-submitted, I did a revision and I wasn't sure how extensive it was going to be, so I unpublished it, and republished it once it was completed. Thank you all for your encouragement and support!

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Words fail me at the adorableness of this story. I love it and am so glad I found it. I'm sad I didn't get to read it earlier but am so glad I got to read it now.

It was cute, touchy and...well damn i envy Breaburn now XD

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Dat ending hahahahahahah :rainbowlaugh:

awww, this was so adorable, I loved it. I'm envious now. Thanks for writing it ^^

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

This kinda didn't really go anywhere for me. It's just sort of your standard love confession story, with a paper-thin mystery you can see coming a mile away.

Part of me wishes you'd played up the "I want you to be my fillyfriend" angle. Could have added a lot of humor to the piece.

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That's understandable, Present. This is actually the first MLP fic I ever wrote, and I was just doing it as a random short blip. If I remember correctly, it was inspired by someone wanting to see the paring in a thread on PonyChan's /fic/. It may be something I revisit again in the future, but yeah, it wasn't really written to be much of anything more than a "cutefic" at the time.

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

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YAY

FYI, I went through my favorites recently and added the other stories of authors appearing there to my to-read, so you may be seeing more comments from me on older works in the future. BRACE YOURSELF

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I shall remain braced! Hopefully my other stories are more to your liking :)

That was nice, will read more of your work later peace.

I don't think I've seen this pairing anywhere else before. :twilightsmile: For the originality, the d'aww, the clean writing, and the laugh at that end (I'm pretty sure where that came from!), have a fave!

Braeburn couldn't help but blush madly as his heart fluttered about in his chest. The awkward, but happy side was definitely moving to the winning side.

argh. how delightful!

I’ve been rereading your stories again. oh wow, I just can’t stop loving them! Truly the best ones this site has to offer. Each time I pick them up, there’s always something new… and fun… and lovely. Thank you for writing!

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